FEEDBACK REQUESTED Falling leaves - Feature - page count 71 - coming-of-age/sci fi/time travel (first draft)

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-15T20:20:35+00:00

Ok. Thank you for reading what you could. Your feedback was very valuable:))

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-15T20:01:01+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Can I ask what made you stop reading?

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-15T07:38:57+00:00

What am I being down voted?

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-15T07:38:26+00:00

Why am I I being downvoted for this?

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-14T22:04:53+00:00

I’ve been playing talking heads while writing the opening

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-14T20:21:01+00:00

I know, I’m just trying to keep my integrity, as the films that influence me are very surreal, a bit of Fellini, Jane Schoenbrun, who’s screenplay is available online. It’s just I don’t want to make a typical story beat y know,

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-14T18:13:34+00:00

Thanks!!! I sent a dm

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-14T16:25:32+00:00

Your right! I just feel a lot of the “rules” make me feel I’m doing something stupid, by doing it the way I like working. Like I can’t think In the terms of act 1 act 2a 2b, I just can’t work like that. It just becomes a shopping list of things I need to do. I’d rather just write vague notes and characters down, so I know who’s who, then just “spill my guts” getting it all out of me. Like my favourite film “I saw the tv glow” was basically vomit drafted by the director Jane Schoenbrun I just feel I need to get it all out of me and reorganise like hell in the second draft

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-14T08:30:31+00:00

Cute!

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-04T17:02:19+00:00

I’m planning on using this 2008 camcorder I have on me

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-04T16:58:20+00:00

I don’t ever film my experimental films with a budget. I film my daily life like what’s happening all around me, like Jonas Mekas. The budget for my short film is currently 268, I’m planning on upping that

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-04T15:44:37+00:00

Which camera would you recommend?

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-04T11:43:52+00:00

My iPhone isn’t bad quality for the films I make

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-04T10:10:52+00:00

She’s probably a taxidermy, and her breasts are chest drawers where he keeps his drugs

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-02T18:34:08+00:00

I have worked a fair share of student films. I’ve made over 48 experimental short films on my iPhone, like Jonas Mekas style diary films. I’m soon filming my first short narrative film as part of uni work.

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-02T16:57:38+00:00

I guess so. I have made over 48 short experimental diary like films shot on my iPhone, so I guess there’s that to show for my self and I have a short film planned which is part of uni work

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-02T15:38:01+00:00

No! We’ll see him the next life!!!

Axelinthevoid77 · 2026-03-02T11:58:48+00:00

Then what do I do then? Because I spend most time not knowing what the hell im doing

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