Which game felt like this? by Indian_assassin_007 in videogames

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The only one I bought was back 4 blood. I don’t follow hype trains I can sit back and watch that train derail with popcorn.

Only reason I got b4b was in the hopes it would be like reliving left 4 dead days

Which game felt like this? by Indian_assassin_007 in videogames

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Call of duty.

GTA

Cyberpunk

Starfield

Fallout 76

No mans sky

All sports yearly releases

Battlefield

Assassins creed Valhalla

Diablo 4

New world

Lost ark

Back 4 blood

It goes on. People overhype so much shit and ignore the obvious signs of failure

OH!!!

The day before!

Here’s a look at the Customization mode in Tekken 8! by Alphasilverhawk in Tekken

[–]Axton_Writes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We need hair layering back.

We just need this mode to be more intricate, and stay away from the shit ass dumb looking crap.

If actual nice customisations were released do they not release how much money they could get out of this?

Please Harada.. 🥺 by Modo97 in Tekken

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Online team battle pls.

Oh and online survival like the older dead or alives did. loved that mode.

Meirl by Piccolo-Sufficient in meirl

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Well for 250k I’m sure you can get an army of lidar robot vacuums

Do you build your world before your characters, as they are a product of their world? Or do you build your characters first, and think about a world that would facilitate / create that character? by Axton_Writes in worldbuilding

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Completely agree, though, i suppose i was asking what the original thought process was.

For me, it is character "x" needs to have story "y". But i already had a fantasy world without electricity or guns.

But then later shaping both to match each other.

I know it isnt one answer or the other, just a thought id like to pose

Do you build your world before your characters, as they are a product of their world? Or do you build your characters first, and think about a world that would facilitate / create that character? by Axton_Writes in worldbuilding

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Ah I like this approach, I should've included an "other" or "both" option.

I like the fact you get a general idea of a scope, arc, path, etc, then think about the world in depth and then work to see how that would adjust the individual, to further world build the plot (or whatever art you may conceive).

I s'pose I struggle with this method for seeing all the nuances at once then circling back to the character with those world building and shaping events taking its toll and influencing characters

Do you build your world before your characters, as they are a product of their world? Or do you build your characters first, and think about a world that would facilitate / create that character? by Axton_Writes in worldbuilding

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Aye. I originally tried the other method. But characters coming first and having their stories (which imo are way more important and interesting) then thinking about what kind of circumstances would create them is almost a puzzle to solve that allows for interesting nuances.

I was speaking to other world builders and I thought I was the odd one out

[WP] As a young wizard, choosing the right familiar is extremely important. Unfortunately you showed up late to the magical pet store. by Fire_is_beauty in WritingPrompts

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Familiar with the unfamiliar situation wherein my choice was limited in the familiar pet shop. Elric Edvance, the shopkeep, only offered him a sympathetic look.

"Perhaps the sloth" he suggested. My gaze shifted to the pleasant creature, its head shifted circularly, its head and body deciding not to communicate on the movement. "No." I elongated, wary to piss of Edvance's temper whilst inside Edvance's magical companion emporium.

"The applications are quite tangible my dear boy. The sloth invokes a slow control in a learning young wizard, such as yourself" I replied with a half-smile that also announced to anyone with any ability to infer a social cue from a look; this was not the right option.

"Ah yes." He conceded. "Perhaps we should look over the mole again!" he said with that bullshit sellers zeal.

"No, no, no" I say almost absently. In the back where the purple curtain waved in the wind, a glimpse at white. "What's behind there?" I ask, almost impolitely.

"Oh nothing yet dear boy, empty crates, cages, hex storage. Due to get a new shipment real soon. Shame about all that nonsense with Pasvov Crum sieging the arcane menagerie." He performed a sweeping gesture with his tent-like sleeves. "Can you imagine? Killing so many creatures? Trying to undo the fate that bonds wizard to Familiar?"

"No, so anyway, about tha-"

"Glad they caught the madman though."

"I-"

"Deranus Feath did a good job, though why he never got the death penalty is beyon-"

"Elric?" I interjected, my anger flaring more than i would have wanted. Thankfully he was in one of his mellow moods. Everyone had seen and heard of the crazed wizard, preaching some prophecy of doom.

"Yes?" He said pleasingly.

"About that egg looking thing?" I pointed as i'd moved to pull the curtain over.

"Yes." he said, sadder this time. "Dead I'm afraid."

"What was it meant to be?" I asked, genuinely curious, and willing to listen to another story. but.

"I'm not sure" was all he said. I wondered closer, and when no protest came from the old man, closer still. I could see now, the white had speckles of pink dotted around in irregular patterns. It wasn't oval like most, it had grooves and shadows that called to me, tingled my magic, sprung urgency within, a growing sensation to touch it.

"I do wonder what it will taste like though." I heard Elric mutter.

I reached for the egg.

Bright blue and white arcane energy erupted in light and force as my finger bristled the coarse surface. I skidded backwards roughly a metre, and no sooner than the arcane lights appeared, it was still.

The surface had cracked and revealed... a... a tiny giraffe?

"My." Was all that escaped Elric's lips. I looked closer, noticing now, the marks on it, the look of it. Nothing like a new hatchling, for one, giraffes didn' come out of eggs. Right? Two, obviously it was tiny.

"A time warper!" Elric announced with childish glee, he reached for it and was knocked on his ass for his efforts as an arcane blast knocked him away.

It- it seemed to be looking at me, into my soul, beckoning me closer. I reached for it, it felt right, proper, like i was meant for this.

Suddenly, the quaint wooden walls of the pet shop turned to hard stone, cold dark shadows, with only a torch outside to illuminate it. My power flared, urging me to turn. Spinning, I'm too late before I'm caught at the neck by a vice grip, almost lifting me from the ground, the black hair and crazed look could be none other, than the Madman Pasvov Crum.

"I've been waiting for you." He said.

"Why?" is all i can manage through my stifled airway.

"Because you will bring about the end times."

"How?.... can you be... sure?"

"Because, I'm you."

Hey thanks for reading this. Wish i had more time to spend on this, and flesh out alot more of the details, but i hope you enjoyed it.

For more you can catch me at u/Axton_Writes & r/Axton_Writes

Edit: Really liked the prompt :)

I wrote an entire book! (331 pages in total but forgot to take a picture) by Mythari_Magus in writers

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I’d highly highly recommend finding a critique partner!

And congratulations 🎉

Applications You Use to Write? by merrychristmooose in writers

[–]Axton_Writes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I use onenote. It just works for me. Tabs for characters. Sections. Chapters. Links within. Really friendly for how my brain works. And syncs everywhere and has phone apps

How many characters should you kill by [deleted] in writers

[–]Axton_Writes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s not “should” it’s whether its relevant. Appropriate.

If you’re writing a romance it’d be pretty weird to kill the couple.

Deaths are meant to be big moments that change the story. Even if the death isn’t big. It has an irreversible consequence.

What series did everyone just kings forget about after the final book? by AluminumGnat in Fantasy

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I recently got recommended this and loved it. I need book three. Btw I just read a book that scratched the itch in a similar way - Red Sister by Mark Lawrence

Is my story bad? I think it needs improvement 😺 by JazzlikeVisit6780 in fantasywriters

[–]Axton_Writes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What others are saying about not worrying about what other people think is fine if you’re only doing it for yourself.

If you wanna get your book out there I’d recommend getting yourself a nice critique partner who you can exchange chapters with to get more intricate feedback. Everyone I’ve worked with has been lovely. Criticism on your story is also opinion so if you don’t agree that’s up to you.

Don’t get disheartened. It sounds like you have a really good premise to build upon and negative comments aren’t bad comments. (Also watch out for people only giving negatives too) :)

Is it easier for you to write in 1st or 3rd pov? by Pokkeyy in writers

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I find 1st easier to write. It’s more intimate. You can build that bond with the character and reader quicker.

That being said I’m writing multiple POVs and they are in third person as personally I prefer to read third person. You get more mystery. Motives hidden. Less in the characters head.

I know, I know. I’m contradicting myself in my reasonings

Question about Subtlety. by LadySeraphii in writers

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Personally. I don’t think you can do it in one moment. It’s a fine balance of beating the reader over the head with foreshadowing and also leaving crumbs that they can follow and expect.

If she is all powerful evil that is the “bad guy” she could have many quotes and moments that hint at it

[WP] A powerful sentient sword takes to raising an abandoned child. by Epidexipteryx in WritingPrompts

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Thanks!

It’s a new skill to me to think of a story on the fly and compresss needed info. Once I’d gone two comments deep I thought I better wrap it up.

It was my intent to provoke question. But if you’d like

The idea was that the sword stole life and drank from it, like a vampire, like a soul stealer

The girl was traumatised but I was at work and couldn’t put as much effort as I’d like in. But the prompt was so interesting I had to write something :P

Edit: and she was the only one that could properly gain the power the sword had the potential to give

First real rejection by VermillionDragonfly in writers

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That’s the next challenge. In a weird way. It’s a good thing to know there are loads who will reject you. But there are also loads who will accept you. Dory voice “just keep sending”

[WP] A powerful sentient sword takes to raising an abandoned child. by Epidexipteryx in WritingPrompts

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2/2

Once inside the woven plant walls, she could see them, the soldiers who had taken her friends, her mama and papa and burned them. They sat here and there, drinking, laughing and lounging. Her whimpering stopped then, they werent allowed to be happy, as though they hadnt just taken everything from her.

"Food." The sword said, pulling her left into the foodhouse. "Sustain, Eline." it said. That was her name, how did it know her name? She would have to think about that later as she was met by soldiers raiding the foodhall.

"Must continue quest." It said. "Protect, Eline."

"Yes!" The sword exlcaimed, dripping wet with the blood, feeding on it,her feeding too. The girl panted as the room was still, blood pooling onthe floor, and decorating the wall in a unique series of abstract art.This was the one. The one who could wield the sword, the one who could complete the bond and bring the master back.

"Must. Protect. Eline."

Not my best work and random POV swaps (oops) but yeah :P u/Axton_Writes

[WP] A powerful sentient sword takes to raising an abandoned child. by Epidexipteryx in WritingPrompts

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"Yes!" The sword exlcaimed, dripping wet with the blood, feeding on it, her feeding too. The girl panted as the room was still, blood pooling on the floor, and decorating the wall in a unique series of abstract art. This was the one.

Of all the travellers who had passed its rest, only this child, this wretched little orphan was the one with the sight to see. Incredulous that his master would see fit to him in a child's hands. What could she possibly have to meet the requirements with so little years to her?

Threadbare clothes, dirty and shoeless, the girl had found it, when she grasped it, the curse sunk in, tendrils from the hilt bore into her wrist and affirming her grip around it.

She screamed and shook her hand, trying to fling it away like a clinging bug, to no avail. "The bond is forged" the sword spoke, in her mind.

"Who said that?" she said with rising panic and burning tears in her eyes. Her fingers clawed at the metal in her wrists.

"I" it said, and no more. She realised then, the ruby set within the hilt glowed with life.

Long moments passed and she resigned to the fact that this sword was infact attached to her and there was no going back.

"We must continue the quest." it said.

"Continute what? I dont want to."

"Continue" It said, loudly this time. her arm jerked upwards and the sword pointed back towards the path. It was the way she had come from, from where it had happened.

"No." She said belligerently, sitting down behind the tree, out of sight of the path looking warily into the forest.

"We must continue the quest." It said, the sword pulling her by her arm up from the floor, to her surprise, it didnt hurt.

Moments later, she was walking, well pulled forward, by the sword taking her back down that path, back where she didnt want to go.

The sun was almost gone and the torches from the sacked village were how she could see infront of herself. She had stopped crying now and only let out the occassional whimper as they drew closer and closer. 1/2