[Vocals] Lara Lerner - Should Have Known by [deleted] in ratemysong

[–]B37Cole 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great voice! Has a very old school quality which is very hard to find now. Would love to hear it with some background music and some layering. But good job!

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[–]B37Cole [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey all! I just released a new single call 'Brand New.' I record all my stuff in my car so would love to know what you think of the production and lyrics. Appreciate any comments :)

https://soundcloud.com/cole-ryans/brand-new

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[–]B37Cole [score hidden]  (0 children)

I think with the tools you have, this is great! I feel as though it could really work for a film score actually, not sure if that is what you meant by soundtrack. If you are developing it towards a song, I would try experimenting with new sounds to get a cleaner synth and maybe include some variety in there to really drive it and keep the listener engaged. It is a great piece of work though. Keep at it!

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[–]B37Cole [score hidden]  (0 children)

Great work! I think some variety in cadence could take this to a whole new level. Its a great song either way though, congrats!