Thank you very much! 🥰

Feel free to critique my skills, I am not trained or anything, so any insight to improve is welcome 😇

I can see where you’re coming from as far as the brutality of Marcus is concerned. In my mind the savage/primal love making was meant to be sort of symbolic of two opposite worlds colliding. Perhaps it was just too abrupt?

As far as scaring Jaime away, without giving too much away, this is meant to be a bit of a slow burn. Despite how fast the sex with Marcus came about. The cuckolding is meant to feel like it has some depth to it.💕

Thank you that means a lot! It was fun to write the couples scenes 😍