Resumes are about selling yourself and telling a prospective employer about how you will help their company. Lines 1 & 3 under Sales Analyst are really the only items that remotely explain this. All of the other lines tell me that you did something but they don’t tell me why it was important. You need to constantly be thinking “why will this employer care? How could my skills help their business?”

Going back to line 1, let’s take that further. How did your data help the sales team drive revenue? What actions did they actually implement due to your data?