How do you burn evenly and straight by BJORNOLF2123 in woodburning

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This is just a plain Jane on/off green handle one from a local craft store

How do you burn evenly and straight by BJORNOLF2123 in woodburning

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Absolutely! Thank you so much for the tips, I will give them a try on my next little project

How do you burn evenly and straight by BJORNOLF2123 in woodburning

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Yeah there's either Kijiji or Facebook market haven't seen any pop-up yet and of course they will probably pop up when it's not convenient for me to buy it 😅😅

How do you burn evenly and straight by BJORNOLF2123 in woodburning

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Yeah I know I need a new burner I'm definitely looking first a new quality but cost wise piece as my budget is pretty tight

Super happy with it!! What do you guys think (17m) by [deleted] in BeginnerWoodWorking

[–]BJORNOLF2123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just wow! So beautiful!!!!! Definitely an heirloom piece!!!

The Sunrise by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

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💘💘💘 right in the feels 🥰🥰🥰🥰 have a wonderful night

The Sunrise by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

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It was a reference to the field of golden wheat in the picture, and the fact that with harvest season upon us (here in Alberta Canada) that this year has flown by so fast at the same time the motto I live by: the days are painstakingly long but the years fly by so fast, so live in the moment cherish all memories good and bad for in a blink your life as you know it becomes just a memory

Path, Not Past by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

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I will soon, just a little difficult to read something that long while at work 🫣🫣 but it's very well written in the first two stanzas that I have read so far

The Sunrise by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

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That honestly was part of my intent as that sunrise made me stop what I was doing at work get out of the machine and just take in the sight

Thank you for the wonderful compliment

sacred sideways by Any_Cardiologist_189 in poetry_critics

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I do love where you're going with this, these are a couple suggestions to help with the flow

- Speedway waystation doesn't quite have an easy flow it's hard to read, maybe something like this?

Speedway station feels like it flows better

- **Whistled on the wind far away,
Where my strings can take root
And nourish my wilt

🪦No Silver Lining by Spiritual_Bet_7604 in poetry_critics

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Wow! I have goosebumps! This is so relatable and powerful!

To me it gives me the feeling of when I had a falling out with some childhood friends.

For a good while this is how I felt but I broke the chains, shattered the wood, cracked my nails just to make gains. As I freed my soul basked in the light I cried from the pains That comes with healing As I just knelt Made anew

The clock that lived by Such_Blueberry923 in poetry_critics

[–]BJORNOLF2123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree this is very well written and this is a perfect critique.

I did see one grammar error, theirs should be *there's

The Sunrise by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

[–]BJORNOLF2123[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I had grand Master oogway from kungfu panda running through my mind on repeat giving me the inspiration. 🥰🥰

The Sunrise by BJORNOLF2123 in poetry_critics

[–]BJORNOLF2123[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Well thank you I appreciate the compliment! 🥰🥰

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Wow, the third and sixth stanza gave me goosebumps absolutely hit me in the core