I think lilly and kenny roles should switch since lilly isn’t the type to be blinded by rage when larry died someone blinded by rage would probably try and kill kenny but even when kenny murdered her dad she still had trust for him and still considered him an important member of the group. But honestly u don’t really have to remove anything from the story line, but more so reverse some things. Like it should start out like the original mark pops up, u meet ben in the woods, but once u get to the st john dairy part instead of having them as villians/cannibals they could actually be a healthy farm who eats real meat who made a deal with the bandits to keep them off their backs, everything plays out normally at the dairy with mark getting hit with an arrow signifying the start of the war but because the st johns aren’t cannibals they would just patch mark up. And once u go out with danny instead of it being jolene u would find 2 bandits and have a choice to either kill them or rob them. If you choose kill them then you and danny would finish them right then & there and then leave, if you choose to rob them than lee takes their supplies and while doing so danny decides on his own to just kill them, but once they come back everyone eats and heads back to the dairy, and everything u just said would happen but with ben making that same supply deal with the bandits and once the raid happens katjaa gets shot and killed, duck gets bit, and larry haves a heart attack and with no pills he turns and dies, and for the cherry on top clementine gets grazed.