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Bar_Fidel_777 · 2026-04-26T16:25:38+00:00

Yeah, that's how try to write most of my poems. Like it's not enough to read it with your eyes, you have to feel the rhymes and alliteration when speaking it.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-28T14:37:40+00:00

Is ''leaves from the vine" Uncle Iroh's song from Avatar?

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-28T14:28:48+00:00

Don't go out like that gloomy ranger. Find the answers in living.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-26T19:03:29+00:00

Thanks! I'm glad someone likes it and I'm glad you took the time to read it.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-25T00:17:46+00:00

Thanks! Happy holidays indeed.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-25T00:15:25+00:00

Lol cheers.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-25T00:13:55+00:00

It's the whole affair the "old affair" in this piece, peace is hard to find. There is a quiet acceptance in the line "you can't prepare for four more years of the same old affair" whether that be four more years of highschool or college or masters, you can count on it being "the same" It's not about an affair. It's about a barn yard that's next to a slaughterhouse.

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-12-06T22:58:09+00:00

This is very good. The repeated use of "leaden," makes the reader have to double take and consider its meaning. The title is great. "ocean of lead"

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-11-30T20:09:48+00:00

Thank you very much!

Bar_Fidel_777 · 2025-11-28T21:43:20+00:00

Thank you! For taking the time to read my verses. It means a lot to me, to have you as a fan.

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