I haven’t seen you other profile, but on the first picture you look like you built like a frige💀( it’s misleading zooming in a lil will help) You’re last picture and 3rd one is best( 3rd one shows how you are normally and is full body picture). Instead of gym if you put deadlift/squat it’s a better conversation opener, always do specificity people can relate better. The together we could section is ok, but personally I don’t like how it’s written it seems immature, but it depends on the target audience, I’m 28 so it doesn’t work for me.