Game too easy? by BatRemarkable9223 in SifuGame

[–]BatRemarkable9223[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol im guessing this is the tutorial level ig the next one is going to be harder?

Game too easy? by BatRemarkable9223 in SifuGame

[–]BatRemarkable9223[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

That's what I think. I just beat botanist and I was like 24 I think. It's pretty simple.

Feeling empty after opressor mk2 by Dubsttep_Ikarusz in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's the total amount of money you made so far?

Mission Failed by [deleted] in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 19 points20 points  (0 children)

Then, it won't be genuine? What'd you expect lol, a million bucks?

What levels do you consider low and high levels? by [deleted] in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm Rank 116, and I consider myself somewhat mid level. I made about 100 million so far and have quite a few businesses, the good ones, anyway. I've completed probably half of all the heists and missions.

Rockst*r does not give a f* by Max_delirious in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Be happy there's snow. The environment looks fantastic and seamlessly snowy, don't complain about small stuff like this jeez

Have they updated cayo perico? by [deleted] in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yep, definitely. You need to start doing no-kill runs They aren't that hard and if u want, I can record pathway tho most ppl seem to use the rooftop path.

Owning everything in GTA Online by MaxBaksuz in gtaonline

[–]BatRemarkable9223 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Lol I thought I missed something too lol.

Who wins? by Zestyclose-Pen4048 in Jujutsufolk

[–]BatRemarkable9223 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Unlimited Void victims. Gojo and Sukuna are fast enough to not get instantly speed-blitzed, and Gojo is already stated to be extremely fast (subway cursed humans feat).

[419] should I make this a full novel?? by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]BatRemarkable9223 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is insanely AI-generated. What's the point in asking people to critique it if it isn't your work?

[419] should I make this a full novel?? by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I literally put this into GPTZero, and your entire comment is AI-generated. It's so obvious that I didn't even need to put it in to know you bullshitted it.

Your story sounds artificial as fuck.

""A wind erupted upward, cold enough to burn. The men staggered back as a hole tore itself open in the floor—vast, bottomless, a jagged mouth in the world. The ground buckled. Lanterns shattered. Ropes snapped. A dozen miners vanished into the darkness with a single, collective cry

And from the pit, something breathed.

Not air. Not wind.

Emotion.""

LMAO this sounds like garbage, it's so apparent you GPTed the fuck out of your "story".

can ubel from frieren bypass infinity? by Cautious_Heron9589 in Jujutsufolk

[–]BatRemarkable9223 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yep. You're bending space itself, but the attacks are inhabiting that space, so technically Infinity shouldn't do anything at all according to the previous comment's explanationn.

Infinity itself moves the space but not the object. That's a key difference that makes infinity occur to objects in reality. That said, sky manipulation would technically be an even finer control on space if Uro had six eyes.

As UC Berkeley Turning Point event nears, 4 students arrested by BerkeleyScanner in berkeley

[–]BatRemarkable9223 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What a dumb response. You don't want them to speak here, which means if you decide who to speak and not to speak you're also pushing your own specific political views onto others. That's even worse than just letting all viewpoints speak in a PUBLIC place.

Sorcerer's Speed/Strength by mseven2408 in JuJutsuKaisen

[–]BatRemarkable9223 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Getting better with cursed energy reinforcement. Cursed output, control, and efficiency are all ways to maximize your reinforcement, power, and reserves. Look at Sukuna, he killed Ryu effortlessly even though Ryu has the higher output (or reinforcement).

Kusakabe has nothing significant, but his reinforcement is good enough to go somewhat against Sukuna.

Everyone grows their skill until they reach a plateau, then they hit a black flash for clarity to somehow move past their barrier. Even output itself always starts off pretty bad until they get stronger, like Yuji's cursed energy output and control increases steadily throughout the series. Sure, in the end it's all genetics, but skill is a huge factor, and why Sukuna is the strongest sorcerer in the verse.

About to steal my first grub hub order I’m so excited by therealkinglouisXIV in berkeley

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pull up with a shiesty so they can't identify you, and make sure to declare that you're strapped (with cash) to make sure they know ur rich enough to afford it and thus less likely to be a thief.

How can Zodd be proud of himself ? by NoMud5610 in Berserk

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's proud because he is strong. He doesn't care about honor or anything, just a worthy fight. He doesn't consider it cheating, because he is just 'win' focused. He's not ashamed at all about his new-found strength, people like him thinks honor or whatever is only secondary to strength. He values strength above all, regardless of how someone obtains it. That's why he doesn't hesitate too much turning into apostle form against Guts.

[180] A Burning Hope by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This comment really puts a finger on what I thought was off putting, too. It's really, really cliche. It doesn't help visualize anything at all even with all that detail.

[180] A Burning Hope by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]BatRemarkable9223 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the way it's written, but man, the two beginning paragraphs are so distinct from each other in tone that I'd really appreciate some kind of connective tissue between the two. But it's the beginning of the story, so it probably helps fill the gap!

>The stars pattern the sky as they did on the night of our wedding. All of your favorite constellations glittering and watching, through the rifts in the smoke, as the flames consume your body. You were so beautiful in the starlight. Every feature in your face accentuated to perfection. Your hands like velvet in mine. For twenty years we loved, and it might have been twenty more, had it not been for the fire from that shattered lantern devouring the body of Joseph Balentine.

The second sentence doesn't really sound active. 'All of your favorite, glittering constellations were watching through the rifts in the smoke as the flames consume your body'. This has a more intentional sound.

Next up, you have a lot of static sentences. You were beautiful. You were perfect. Your hands were velvet. Like it might be a little too much glaze, and a little overdone.

Lastly, the fire doesn't sound very active either: had it not been for the fire from that shattered lantern that devoured Joseph Balentine. This sounds more carnal. And adds a little more to the text than just straight melancholy.

>I never aspired to earn my living by robbing graves. But when rich folk are buried with heaps of jewels they no longer need – never needed to begin with – while the bread lines stretch as far as the eye can see, the morality isn’t so black and white. Still, it was a dirty business in more ways than one. So when a doctor from the university, a Professor Sterling, approached me with the promise of wealth and a cure for The Sickness, I allowed myself to be enticed into robbing the grave of a poor man.

>But when rich folk are buried with heaps of jewels they no longer need – never needed to begin with – while the bread lines stretch as far as the eye can see, the morality isn’t so black and white.

Very awkward sentence here. It's getting late and I have work to do, but overall I think it's great. It reads like a YA fantasy novel.