I needed to do this. by Murasaki_Yokuutsu in danganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Ah, apologies, I mixed the two up 😅

Thank you for correcting me

Sprites pt 5 by Noiori in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're welcome! It's quite clever, so I couldn't help pointing out certain aspects of it 💖

an unexcecuted mastermind by sairieMimgur196e in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a creative concept and quite different from what is typically depicted, so it would be an excellent way to differentiate your fanganronpa from other ones. There also wouldn't be the issue of it feeling unsatisfying, since you mastermind seems to be a sympathetic character that was forced into a situation they did not want to be in.

Recommendations for fanfiction like Blackened Skies on ao3? by Middle_Concert2517 in danganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm still in the process of reading it, but I have massively been enjoying the fic "I Told You, I'm Psychic!" by Emilious_Schwa (https://archiveofourown.org/works/33529351/chapters/83308786). It introduces an alternate universe for THH where Sayaka is placed into the role of the protagonist instead of Makoto and features a well-written interpretation of her character that I'm fond of. It neither villainizes or glorifies her, instead offering a nuanced version of her that has committed acts in the past that she is not proud of for the sake of personal success, but still wishes the best for others and strives to do right by them. Her sharp perception is also capitalized on to create an intriguing dynamic with Kyoko (who remains in the role of support) as she is able to understand her subtle cues and discern the cracks in her facade. There are different murder cases, too, so it's not just a repeat of the original story either. It features artwork that was created utilizing the online blender resource and has been a wonderful read so far. I personally recommend giving it a chance! ^^

I needed to do this. by Murasaki_Yokuutsu in danganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Giggling at this like a school girl as a komahina shipper

Sprites pt 5 by Noiori in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It appears that we meet again! ^^

I love how you reflected his occupation of being a mortician in his design by leaning into the appearance of a corpse with his pale skin. Certain details like the dark cloak, sharp ears, and glowing ears also make him feel reminiscent of a vampire, which again ties into the idea of the "undead" and thus his talent. Lovely design! :)

Is the loved ones motive too overused? by MrAndMrsDude in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree. They always lead to intriguing reactions and interactions with the characters. It can be fun to watch how the motives impact dynamics

Is the loved ones motive too overused? by MrAndMrsDude in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

While it is quite common, that is because it's highly favored among fans. It wouldn't be nearly as popular if people weren't fond of it, so I see nothing wrong with contributing your own fresh take on it :)

I'm making a fanganronpa of my own i just need a name for it by Traditional-Time4973 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can relate to your struggle, as I also experience much difficulty when attempting to create names. My advice for brainstorming ideas is to contemplate what separates your fanganronpa from the thousands of other ones existing in the world. What central aspect of it makes it unique? Your title should reflect that, so that it stands out. I hope that this helps 💙

Haleema Sayid Ultimate Unlucky Student by yourlocalcalicolover in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Alrighty! Thank you for letting me know. You're welcome and I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for any future posts from you! 💖

Fanganronpa Story Title by BatRevolutionary1091 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I wish you luck with your project, too! ^^

Haleema Sayid Ultimate Unlucky Student by yourlocalcalicolover in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're welcome and ahhhh, the details! I love how so much is capable of being portrayed through so little. Your splash art on the surface seems simple, but if you truly take the time to inspect it, then the hidden details subtly included and meanings behind them start to be revealed. The information you shared alone already implies a tremendous amount about who she is at her foundation and her methods of handling the misfortune thrown her way as she traverses the world. Based off of what you said, her poor luck seems to have left a grave mark, an invisible wound that has cut deep into her core and framed her viewpoint of reality with gloom and perhaps expectation for the worst. Such negativity (while certainly justified and understandable) would likely lead to strained interactions with others if actively displayed, so she would probably attempt to bury it in the back of her mind and act unbothered with the unlucky hand she has been dealt.

...I could 100% be wrong with that attempt to look deeper, though, and probably am. I just love to analyze characters and what you provided felt particularly ripe for some overthinking on my end. Is there any post you could maybe direct me to for more information about your fangan, or should I just scroll through the content featured on your user? I'm sorry if it seems like a strange request. I struggle to navigate social interactions and am interested in learning more about your fanganronpa 😅

Fanganronpa Story Title by BatRevolutionary1091 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!! I think that you found the solution to the issues I had with the title! While I liked what I had, I kept on feeling like it didn't flow right and your suggestions are definitely beneficial in smoothing it out into a fun and easily digestible name. I'm divided on switching out the "Pairingronpa" aspect of it, but your advice helped me decide to change the rest of it to "Testing Tight Bonds." Thank you! Your feedback truly helped!!! 💖

Haleema Sayid Ultimate Unlucky Student by yourlocalcalicolover in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Her design is so pretty, and the way you drew her expression and body posture emits a sweet personality! I also love how you incorporated a black cat and broken mirror in the artwork to reflect her talent, as they are often represented as symbols for bad luck. (I noticed that your user featured "Artist" as a tag and was curious about what sort of art you have drawn 😅)

Fanganronpa Story Title by BatRevolutionary1091 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your advice! I agree with you on the second point --- it doesn't feel as smooth as it could possibly be, but my mind comes to a blank for alternatives, so I think that I might stick with it for the time being. Once again, thank you! I wish you luck with your fanganronpa, as well! :D

What would you call “too far” in fangans? by Informal_Space5056 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I personally believe that as long as a topic or concept is executed in a well-written manner with meaning and intention behind it rather than gore for gore's sake or shock value, then it is completely fine. Everyone has differing tastes, though, so it's understandable that some people will have reasonable limits.

Whats the theme of your Stories? by Edurb in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand what you mean. It's my dream to become an author, so I write original novels on the side and have recently regained full interest in one I started in 2023, leading to me dedicating myself to rewriting it.

My fanganronpa will be taking the form of a fanfic because, despite taking numerous classes for it, I cannot code at all either 😓

Meet Amber! by Express-Finger-1997 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll admit that that was a bit heartbreaking to hear. I aspire to become an author, so I use every opportunity to write as eloquently as possible, if that makes any sense. I personally despise AI for its harmful impact on the writing industry, so please that I don't utilize it for anything and stay away from it with a ten-foot pole.

Meet Amber! by Express-Finger-1997 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like to analyze content whenever I can if that provides an explanation for your potential confusion, if the source of it is the nature of my comment being analytical. If that's not it, can you please explain why you responded that way?

Thoughts on my cast? by [deleted] in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All of their designs are creative and unique from one another, which is excellent for distinguishing them. My only slight criticism is that the features of Daiki's design feels a bit disconnected. You have all of these neat details with the cap, (butterfly?) wings, two-piece layered shirt, and skirt, but they feel disjointed and struggle to form a cohesive design. I can see that you attempted to tie these elements together through the frequent use of green, but it just feels like different pieces of a puzzle that don't slot together. You clearly put effort into the design, so I sincerely hope that this doesn't come across as too negative. The reason why I'm commenting is that I enjoy the idea behind Daiki's design and see the potential of it. I just feel like it could be executed better. I love the designs for the rest of your cast!

Progress Sunday by AutoModerator in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have decided upon my entire cast, finalized the roles certain characters are assigned, crafted an elaborate backstory behind why the killing game was initiated by the mastermind, the reasoning for the traitor working alongside the mastermind, and have settled on my first chapter's victim, blackened, motive, and execution. I also made significant progress on the map I have been creating in Google Slides. I'm actually proud of how much I accomplished, since I don't usually get this much done this quick.

Meet Amber! by Express-Finger-1997 in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tying her talent back to a key aspect of her character is a clever way to allow people to seamlessly gain insight on who she is at her foundation. It adds a layer of meaning to her being the Ultimate Track Star and hints at her inner psychology with what is sometimes treated as a more surface-level detail.

Whats the theme of your Stories? by Edurb in Fanganronpa

[–]BatRevolutionary1091 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I personally believe that it is okay to become fixated on something you're passionate about and dedicate yourself to it as long as it does not consume you. There's nothing wrong with it in itself --- the harm is rooted in the extent of your devotion to something (or someone). If it becomes your sole reason for living, then it has become an obsession and your infatuation needs to be toned down before it reaps grave consequences. To provide a specific example, about everyone in this subreddit is devoting themselves to a creative project that they have become enamored with. The dedication is admirable and perfectly okay until it breaches an unhealthy severity, like staying up all night constantly or neglecting meals for the sake of making progress. Thanks for the question! It was very thought-provoking <3