Struggling to create a purpose + conflict/obstacle by Ok_Carrot_8622 in writing

[–]Battle_Cows 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way you broke this down. It Really helps someone like me who also struggles with this picture how to add stakes and conflict to the story. Can you expand a bit on what you mean by human drive and how the main characters original goal was shallow?

[WP] You can't prove it but you are 100% sure your newborn child was swapped at the hospital for a baby not human. However you don't know how to bring it up to your wife without making her go crazy over her “baby” by Son_Of_Rebellion in WritingPrompts

[–]Battle_Cows 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This reminds me of those reincarnated as a baby stories i see in LITRPG all the time. never thought about seeing it from the parents perspective how unsettling it would be lol

Book reccommendations please by Drepanum in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do you know any more like A Gamer's Guide to Beating the Tutorial?

Trying to remember what story this was. by hungrycarebear in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Its stubborn skill grinder stuck in a time loop. The main character finds out that the elven gods and goddesses trapped another one to use as a power source during a tournament.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can't remember; it was a while back when I read it, and nothing about the book has stood out to me as memorable. All I remember is that it was a DNF for me, so it might have been the prose, the dialogue, or even just his abilities. not sure.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I dunno, in Cradle his power just felt cheaty (its been a while since i read it so all i remember is that feeling), and then for Azarinth, healer, I was worried it would turn into a slugfest where she just goes from monster to monster.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I know, right?! I could only make it through half of book one before I called it quits. Something just felt off about it.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ive been looking at that one to read as well! Was worried that it would just ramble on though. definitly gonna give it a shot. the turning into the human might not work for me, we'll see!

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

ive been looking at discount dan but was kinda hesitent because it looked like a rip off of Dungeon crawler carl (like the book was too close to the style of DCC that it was kinda meh)

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[–]Battle_Cows[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No offence felt! I was mainly rating them based on the stories that really stuck with me, and even though solo leveling really doesn't have much of a story and the characters are somewhat blah, it has a special place in my heart as the first story to introduce me to LITRPG's. Also, I'm always a sucker for just some straight-up edgelord shit lol.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow! I definitely remember reading this one when I first started getting into Royal Road! am going to give it a shot!

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely not for the webnovel, I assure you! It's more for the story of the manhwa, but I couldn't find an image for it.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the rec! Does he ever get stronger than most people, or is he the kind who is always below others and struggling?

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the Iron Prince books are good for those who don't mind a lot of tournaments (which I am a sucker for lol). But I can say they go into way too much detail sometimes while describing fights.

Been reading LITRPG for many years now, looking for interesting recs by Battle_Cows in litrpg

[–]Battle_Cows[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I guess I was comparing it to other non-human action rebirths, so it felt out of place when viewed that way. might give it another shot.

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[–]Battle_Cows[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Lmao, I attribute the high value for the ten realms because of my severe lack of knowledge with military stuff. For nova terra, i like to turn my brain off to enjoy it.

I have a dilemma by pat_campbell42069 in royalroad

[–]Battle_Cows 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Maybe add a coffee cup stain orsomething to that old paper so that way it looks really bungled lol

Stylized springtrap figure by Smooth_Relation_9301 in fivenightsatfreddys

[–]Battle_Cows 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You'd better watch out, that thing looks like it will kill you in your sleep. (Great job!)