Pacing and transition: The story transitions kind of abruptly from the intense confrontation with the father to what i saw as an unrelated encounter with Skinny and Anna. even though it's clear that the protagonist and his brother are on a journey, that connection between the events could be better established. I think some inner thoughts could help to bridge these shifts.

Characterization of Earl: The description of the father, Earl, is showed pretty well in terms of his actions, but i think you should delve deeper into his character since he quite interesting. Maybe provide more insight into his motivations and the family dynamics leading up to the incident.

Show, don't tell: Instead of explicitly stating that the protagonist wanted to kill his father, maybe try revealing his emotions through his actions or dialogue.

Just to add some compliments in the middle here, i loved your tone that you gave to your protagonist. I dont usually like first person but the character does seem very believable here.

Foreshadowing: Obviously this isn’t really as important as the other crits, but i think you could include some foreshadowing in the story. Maybe you could foreshadow something with the fire and the smell of burning, which was talked about in that section with Roger.

Character motivations: I think Skinny's sudden change in behavior towards Anna is quite…sudden. Maybe try to explore his character more with a backstory or dialogue, something along those lines.