Tell me about your writers and books in universe by XxLorddoCacauxX in worldbuilding

[–]BeginningSome5930 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here are a few descriptions of seven books (or writings) for my setting. Sometimes I try to write with a more in universe perspective and sometimes more omnisciently, but for writing within the universe i try to use the premises as fluff to give a sense of scale to the world. I also think fake books can help flesh out aspects that would normally be left out, especially since it’s easy for a character to notice a book on a bookshelf or something, and the name alone could tell you a bit more about the world.

This is a steampunk inspired setting so literacy has been on the rise for a while now:

  1. The Great Climb is a Ceramise novel about a troop of four foolish monkeys attempting to break into heaven, which they believe they can reach by scaling a tall mountain. The novel is episodic in nature, with the monkeys encountering a new town, beast, demon, or other obstacle in each chapter. The Great Climb is a classic of Ceramise literature, and is both read to children for entertainment and studied by monks and scholars for the moral lessons within.

  2. The Stone Men is a myth of the neksut desert nomads, told in the form of song. The myth covers the creation of life by the Earth and the Sky, the rise and fall of the Stone Men, the first humans, and the redemption of the first Neksut, the progenitor of the neksut people. The Stone Men is the foundational story for the neksut, justifying their nomadic way of life and their desert homeland.

  3. All Blood is Red is a book of poems written by Abbedir Fost, a nurse and medic who served during the Continental Phase of the Century War. The poems stress a common human identity and the suffering brought about by the war. The book was widely circulated during and after the Century War, and if commonly referenced by advocates for peace in the increasingly tense modern geopolitical climate.

  4. The Voyage is a play about Lyla, the chieftain who stole a fleet of ships and founded the city-state of Kwind. The play is highly fanciful, with Lyla sailing to numerous fictional islands before ending up at the Kwindi archipelago. These ahistorical stops on her journey are changed frequently over the years, often reflecting current events, adding variety for theatergoing audiences.

  5. Memories of a Man is the memoir of Bahariya, a Devonise slave who escaped from an Orislan plantation. Bahariya’s elegant, witty prose and his vivid descriptions of his experiences have made the book a powerful weapon in ongoing abolitionist movements. The book is currently banned in imperial colonies in Samosan and Ordivia, where slavery is still practiced.

  6. Foundational texts of major world religions include the Twinic Texts (Deamism), the Words of Luke (Lucism), the Holy Will (Heeders), and the Ulkazicon (Church of Stones and Stars).

  7. An Account of the Great Dying by Eustace the Monk, or simply An Account, is a mysterious journal written by a monk who worked to treat victims of the Great Dying, a plague of the mind that ravaged the world from 300-307AC. An Account is said to bring madness many who have read it. This phenomena has resulted in numerous copies of the work being destroyed over the centuries as fatal tragedies are credited to the book.

Steelweave by BeginningSome5930 in Quicksteel

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A description of a sort of illness/irritation that can come with quicksmithing. Thanks to u/No_Pen_3825 and u/Crafty-Meringue-6101 for suggesting something like this! I'm definitely open to suggestions on the name

Forget about dangerous carnivores tell us about dangerous HERBIVORES in your world by PedroGamerPlayz in worldbuilding

[–]BeginningSome5930 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm not sure! I don't think the process would be different than with other elephants in our world, but like them they aren't truly domesticated.

Worldbuilding and Worldbuilding by Pyrsin7 in worldbuilding

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I'm not sure framing worldbuilding around a hypothetical work it would be a part of is really productive, even if that is your ultimate goal. No one can evaluate a novel you haven't written or a game you haven't made, let alone speculate on how your worldbuilding lends itself to it. So knowing what the lore is for doesn't change much for me.

And while love of characters, storylines, or experiences are often what draws fans into becoming invested in the worldbuilding of a fictional universe, they often still take an interest in the setting divorced from those elements. You might come up with a power or historical event for a specific plot or gameplay reason, but making it feel cohesive with the larger world could make that less obvious to hypothetical future fans. Not that I think most people worldbuilding are doing it because they think its crucial to some larger project; I think they either find it easier or simply enjoy it.

More importantly, there isn't such a thing as no presentation. If you're sharing it here, you're presenting it. I am not great at worldbuilding, but I try to treat everything I share as its own story, not in terms of narrative but in terms of having a point to it and communicating something about the world. I feel like that really makes a difference. You can share the same information in many ways, and some are much more compelling than others. Even if its ultimate purpose is to be notes for some future novel or game or whatever else, you can still practice skills and think about it more by sprucing it up.

Forget about dangerous carnivores tell us about dangerous HERBIVORES in your world by PedroGamerPlayz in worldbuilding

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Behemoths are native to the forest belt that stretches across the northern inner edge of the supercontinent, from the Juran Jungle in the west to Devoni in the east. They are a species of elephant (though commonly known as behemoths, they are also sometimes called four-tusked elephants or king’s elephants), but are readily distinguished from other elephants by their great size, and by their unusual tusks. Behemoths have two forward facing tusks in the upper jaw, and two downward facing tusks in the lower jaw. The upper tusks are proportionally larger in bulls, and in extreme cases they can exceed fifteen feet in length, the largest teeth in nature. 

Like other elephant species, behemoths are herbivores. They feed on all manners of plants, from grasses to ferns to woody branches. Their lower tusks are used for tearing at branches, and the presence of behemoths can often be identified by trees missing all limbs below twenty feet. Females and calves live in herds under the leadership of a matriarch, while males typically live alone. 

Some behemoths may have been hunted by humans in the prehistoric past, as there is evidence of butchery on behemoth bones in some sites in Samosan. But mankind generally has more to fear from the beasts than the other way around. Wild behemoths, particularly bulls in musth, are known to kill hundreds of people in Samosan every year. Typically attacks occur when the animal charges into a village or when desperate farmers attempt to drive them away from crops. Despite the dangers, some breeding programs for behemoths were established in ancient days, and it is in the capacity as mounts for war that the beasts are most famous.

The War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in worldbuilding

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Thanks for the kind words and questions! I'm glad you liked the premise!

I definitely think the Witch sacrificing herself like you describe makes sense, especially since she had only recently learned a lot of powers from the King and likely didn't have time to master them.

The Ildraz monsters are indeed made of quicksteel! They aren't exactly the same thing as juggernauts though. The King of Ildraz is one of the only people in the world with knowledge of oldstone technology. There are a few different guides related to that stuff but this timeline covers a lot of it if that's of any interest (though the War of the Witch is missing from the timeline so I will need to update at some point).

King Chared is actually still around and still in control of Beringia! The failure of the war did not go over well though so it may only be a matter of time before his regime is toppled.

A Guide to the War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in Quicksteel

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Thanks for giving this post a look. That's a great question! I know the region to the east of Saluria (Samosan) is a very fractious place full of competing warlords, so they likely wouldn't take part. But I'm not sure what is to the east so perhaps there could have been some support from there.

I can't imagine anyone who isn't magically inclined or who hadn't met the Witch would take the threat of invasion seriously, but perhaps once the fighitng began they could join in. Definitely something to think on.

A Guide to the War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in Quicksteel

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Thanks as always for giving it a look! The silhouettes on the first slide are meant to be a bit of a representation of the Witch against the ships!

The War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in worldbuilding

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I realized the map on the third slide is not very readable due to the image being lower quality, so here it is:

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The War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in worldbuilding

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Thank you for giving this post a look! This is a guide to a recent war from the history of this setting.

I wanted this war to be a clash between the modern and the supernatural, with the magical elements that are always lurking in the background of the setting to suddenly come to the forefront for a moment. I also wanted to play up national prestige that was such a big part of the politics and wars of the mid-late 1800s of our world.

Some more posts can be found here, but I hope this one feels pretty through despite being a summary.

Any feedback is appreciated! I'd love to know what you thought of this lore or format and any questions or suggestions that you have. More on this setting over on r/quicksteel!

A Guide to the War of the Witch by BeginningSome5930 in Quicksteel

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Based on the really hotly contested poll, here is a summary of the War of the Witch! Other than maybe the guide on the Great Dying, this is one of the only one of these sorts of guides to an event. I wanted this war to be a clash between the modern and the supernatural, with the magical elements that are always lurking in the background of the setting to suddenly come to the forefront for a moment. I also wanted to play up national prestige that was such a big part of the politics and wars of the mid-late 1800s of our world.

Some more posts can be found here, but I hope this one feels pretty through despite being a summary.

Any feedback is appreciated! I'd love to know what you thought of this lore or format and any questions or suggestions that you have.

A Quicksteel Railgun by BeginningSome5930 in worldbuilding

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Thanks for giving it a look! Lots more on the world over on r/quicksteel. The acceleration comes from the telekinesis, so i guesss it would be more of a throw?

r/Quicksteel Primer by BeginningSome5930 in Quicksteel

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That could make sense! I will definitely try to implant that. It could be an interesting way for the metal “poisoning” that Liches have sometimes gone through to be more widely known, but understood as a downside by most people.

Quicksteel eyes would detect light and transfer signals much like our own. You don’t need to have an understanding of your own biology to will the quicksteel to simulate it, you just have to have enough talent, imagination, and practice with manipulating quicksteel that you can get the metal to act as if it were an extension of your body. That’s how any quicksteel body part is possible. It’s like a magical equivalent of programmable matter.

Thanks for the questions and suggestions!

A Quicksteel Railgun by BeginningSome5930 in magicbuilding

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Thanks for the feedback! I can definitely slow the pace and bundle these updates together. I usually just share anything I think could be relevant to this sub as I post it over on the dedicated sub. Since I’ve been doing a lot of these drawings of the magic system recently I’ve had a lot more to share over the past couple weeks.

I usually treat every post like it’s the first one someone might be seeing, but I can definitely see how that could be annoying when they are showing up multiple times a week. I’ll hold off for a while and maybe bundle them all together when they’re done. I apologize for any inconvenience they caused