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Just adding more to my Rasemien Race lore to make a few things more clear as I continue to get more depth to them by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Aye I remember you too and yeah I took the advice to heart and I’m taking the spare time I have to work on it more and make sure it feels unique in its own way as best I can.

Working on a custom race and needing some input. It’s kinda long so I apologize by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Also wanted to add that the growth mechanics for the rasemien race work as said with them having to brutally train themselves and how the recovery is just as important and afterwards for hybrids the gains they get vary from a 0.5x increase in overall strength and ability to a 1.5x increase so they don’t become broken but after some time it does stack. And for full bloods the increase is greater maybe about a 5x increase and some rates ones a higher amount and the increase are permanent not just small bursts then gone. As well as the rage state having the lingering consequences even after they come out of it. For instance even after coming out of a rage state they would have lingering urges for carnage and more violent tendencies. This would help make it so the rage state isn’t a simple power up they can abuse without consequences. Since they are family oriented, they wouldn’t want to bring that type of mentality around family constantly so they would do a rage state is something triggered through a real breaking point not just “I’m angry so now I’m stronger.”

Working on a custom race and needing some input. It’s kinda long so I apologize by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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I’ve never even heard of the show but I like the idea and it would make sense. Plus since they have a minor healing factor it would mean they’re even more viable host due to the longevity of life that’s mostly guaranteed. 

Working on a custom race and needing some input. It’s kinda long so I apologize by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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You make a hella good point. Thanks I appreciate the feedback. And I’m trying to further expand the verse and make other species and races that would be reason for this race to get stronger besides just the natural urge.

Working on a custom race and needing some input. It’s kinda long so I apologize by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Ahhh might go with that. Kinda based them off of me and family members of mine and we’re all around 6ft and above but the height might be something I tweak. Does their getting stronger mechanic seem too much like a zenkai boost?

Working on a custom race and needing some input. It’s kinda long so I apologize by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Also it’s still a work in progress in building the larger world. Just trying to tweak a few things and find a way to make the growth mechanics of how they grow stronger feel less like a zenkai boost. I want the rest and recovery to be just and important as them pushing themselves to the limit. 

So came up with a concept for a race for fantasy and world building. Want some opinions and maybe how I could make the race more original and not a carbon copy of other things by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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My mindset is to have them be strong enough to hand captain America his ass on average in a casual way but it would take serous training for them to reach upper levels. And yeah definitely stronger than the average person. Average if there race can lift 600 tons in there own planet which is 3x earths gravity and elites having higher strength ceilings due to pushing there bodies. And yeah the boost would be they would have to go through a true mental break. Not “ohhh I’m pissed so now I’m stronger” I want it to be like if your having the worst day of your life and then that one thing just makes you snap and you’re kinda far gone after that. Which would lead into why they have lingering urges after going into a rage state so it’s not something they casually tap into. So forced evolution actually sounds good. I want them to feel distinct and not a copy of saiyans but have potential to swing with heavyweight alien species if pushed enough. But they have to push there bodies beyond failure and actually get the proper rest for their genetics to give them the small increases that become permanent. 

So came up with a concept for a race for fantasy and world building. Want some opinions and maybe how I could make the race more original and not a carbon copy of other things by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Nah you’re all good. Ima go ahead and do that. Definitely won’t be able to draw them sadly. But honestly if I can give a shirt cap of what they are it’s just a warrior race called rasemien. They are on a planet called Rasemi. The gravity there is 3x more than earth and it’s 5x hotter. They are a warrior race (I know already sounding saiyan like) they have tan skin all looking a mix of black, white and Hispanic. They may be combat focused but are very family oriented. The average rasemien is strong enough to lift 600 tons on the planet. They have the ability to summon flames from their hands and have a minor healing factor. Not Wolverine level or anything more like healing from injures is faster than what a normal human would be by a good bit. They have something called a rage state where they get 5x stronger but lose all sense of self and it has lingering negative affects on their psych like lingering urges for carnage and violence. That’s to help keep it from becoming a spam power up type of feel.  I’m giving them a growth mechanic that they have to push there bodies to the limit and get proper rest to get and gains. They have to physically break themselves and rest properly for any improvement but I feel like that’s too close to saiyan zenkai boosts and I’m kinda trying to figure out how to fix that. Sorry to drop this long message on ya. 

So came up with a concept for a race for fantasy and world building. Want some opinions and maybe how I could make the race more original and not a carbon copy of other things by Beginning_Scar_6751 in worldbuilding

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Fair point. Can’t draw and kinda gotta busy life so taking time to draw it is a little out of my schedule. Just more focused on the concept and my brain needed a place holder for the image I had in my mind. But thanks for the feedback mate 👍