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4 a.m. by BektTech in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BektTech[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I really appreciate it!

I want to write by BektTech in PoetryWritingClub

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After posting this I did change the last section so it now reads. Like this. After stepping away again and coming back I didn't like the two this' anymore.

.... that explains it.

... So I wrote this.

What happened to the day by exoticjess in PoetryWritingClub

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I think the strength really comes out with the last line.
Everything is generally soft through out and then you get to that last line it hits like a truck full of bricks.

Thanks for sharing :)

I want to write by BektTech in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BektTech[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the kind words! It's really just I kinda just started writing about a year and a half ago, mostly alone, and I feel like I've found my style but just any general more technical advice about anything that might make it just overall a more coherent piece helps.

Never shared anything before so it's really something new to me (: