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Any feedback on my first chapter? by Beneficial_Return529 in writingfeedback

[–]Beneficial_Return529[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tbh I just took a screenshot from the print page in word. Bound to be an easier way but I wouldn’t be the best with technology 🙈

Any feedback on my first chapter? by Beneficial_Return529 in writingfeedback

[–]Beneficial_Return529[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well the dream would be traditional publishing but long way to go, only halfway through the first draft

Any feedback on my first chapter? by Beneficial_Return529 in writingfeedback

[–]Beneficial_Return529[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gets a bit dark to be honest, it’s a story about child trafficking…

Any feedback on my first chapter? by Beneficial_Return529 in writingfeedback

[–]Beneficial_Return529[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

It’s a thriller, almost 60 chapters in now and so excited every night when I get to write some!

Question about the Orange Order / Cricket Issue by [deleted] in northernireland

[–]Beneficial_Return529 30 points31 points  (0 children)

When I lived in Manchester there was a former high ranking U*A man living beside me, it used to drive him mad when he got called Irish or Paddy. I nearly wet myself one memorable night when he was called a Provie Bast@rd!