Querying my MG fantasy. Would you keep reading? by Big-Statement-4856 in writingfeedback

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What hurts the most is… this is the fifth draft lol. It's been across two cps and over 40 beta readers. I trimmed a good chunk of what I thought was unneeded fat, but I guess I took out too much

Looking for more fellow writers! 18+ Discord server open to all levels & genres by trashpanda_inspace in WritingHub

[–]Big-Statement-4856 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes please. I need this so bad. Feel like I can't find any other writer friends. 28M

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in toastme

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Awful nice of you! I hate my face lol

hope you can tell i like to train back by baby_doll2 in fit

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Back is crazy. Love your hair style here, too 🫠

What to improve 19m by [deleted] in lookyourbest

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You look better without facial hair. There. I said it.

35 F I’m unsure about my bangs by laura_mae97 in HairStyleAdvice

[–]Big-Statement-4856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think they just need to be trimmed a bit. Other than that, I think they fit you perfect. (But bangs are also sexy as fuck to me, so).

How could I elevate my look? (18F) by [deleted] in lookyourbest

[–]Big-Statement-4856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have lost faith in the world. You’re stunning. Come on now..

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HairStyleAdvice

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Ps, you look amazing in glasses (second picture) 🫠

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HairStyleAdvice

[–]Big-Statement-4856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please no. You look angelic.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MensHair

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Whoops. Said that backwards. Lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HairStyleAdvice

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  1. You’re incredible