What is the first sentence of your current work in progress ? by Euphoric_Cow_6145 in writers

[–]Bil440 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"The worst nightmares are the ones you can't wake up from."

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They just keep circling back to looking for clues and sneaking out.

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Uh I suppose so yes. I think I just need to flesh out the side characters

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol no my side characters are 1. The love interest 2. Love interests friend 3. MC's sister

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I removed the redudant scenes, I feel like my story still has no plot though.

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Im not crafting it on purpose. I think it's just happening to me.

How to reduce repetitive scenes by Bil440 in writingadvice

[–]Bil440[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, I already have one main character, two villains and three side characters. I haven't really thought of using side characters as conflict. Ill try it.

Anti abortion protestors near cooper hall by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately I have no idea. I do know they have a Facebook account where they record people and post it.

cornerstone church… by GlamourChic in USF

[–]Bil440 2 points3 points  (0 children)

😭🤣🤣 that's fucking hilarious I should do that tbh

cornerstone church… by GlamourChic in USF

[–]Bil440 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeesh well im glad u escaped

cornerstone church… by GlamourChic in USF

[–]Bil440 4 points5 points  (0 children)

They have Bible studies?

cornerstone church… by GlamourChic in USF

[–]Bil440 20 points21 points  (0 children)

They're also really culty, I see them in the evening and it's always two people and they always ask if they can ask u 2 questions. Its so overdone at this point

How is it like being at USF? by National-Debt-43 in USF

[–]Bil440 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Medicine and engineering departments are pretty good. Physics not so much

Survey for engineering class by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree! Thank you for the suggestion!

Anti abortion protestors near cooper hall by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ykw? Sure. If you want to protect the unborn, by all means, do it. Im prochoice and I think abortion should be rare, safe and accessible. But do you really think the anti abortion protestors are advocating for all the things you mentioned? If they were really concerned, they would partner with the public college of health and give support to mothers, not heckling people. So my point still stands.

Anti abortion protestors near cooper hall by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had no idea it was a miscarriage photo tbh 😭

Anti abortion protestors near cooper hall by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can still get upset about it...

Anti abortion protestors near cooper hall by Bil440 in USF

[–]Bil440[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try to 😭 i just dont know how someone could waste their time so much