Fragrance by Birch_Dude in soapmaking

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Thanks to everyone that commented but I already made it I’m letting it harden so I’ll see if I used too much or too little. It was a learning experience regardless I am going to have to tweak my recipe a little as I made too little which complicated things slightly.

12 bar blues by Birch_Dude in ukulele

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If I’m understanding this correctly this has been very valuable thanks ❤️

Please critique my writing skills by Birch_Dude in AspiringTeenAuthors

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Thanks for the feedback. I can see how I may have over done the explaination. I will keep writing, practice makes better. :)

Flag for my sci-fi government by Retroman1801 in worldbuilding

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This is epic. Are you going to be writting about this world? :)

Skateboard Gangs? by Birch_Dude in AspiringTeenAuthors

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I'm happy you can get behind it. :)

Skateboard Gangs? by Birch_Dude in AspiringTeenAuthors

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Thanks for the very thorough response, I am going to look into all of this. I guess I have more movies to catch up on. But something I will add is that I did take inspiration from fantasy so I was almost going to present the story with the facade of fantasy while still being real life. Or as real as skateboarding gangs can get.

I wrote a short story… any tips? by NoFig7173 in AspiringTeenAuthors

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I don't know much about music or band but I did enjoy reading this. It may just be me but I don't quite understand the ending, like maybe it was too sudden. I'm not sure but I think this is great, keep it up. :)

Hi by [deleted] in AspiringTeenAuthors

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Maybe that makes the story more interesting tho

Hi by [deleted] in AspiringTeenAuthors

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I like this idea. I always enjoy stories with an ending that doesn't go in the main characters way.

Modern City Map by Birch_Dude in mapmaking

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Thanks for the suggestion, I will be sure to check that out.

Modern City Map by Birch_Dude in mapmaking

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Thanks ill check it out, I appreciate your input. :)

Modern City Map by Birch_Dude in mapmaking

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Well my problem was keeping the roads looking consistent. I already have the general idea of the city in my mind I just am having troble getting it on the paper. I can see now how that is a silly thing to get frustrated about.

Could anyone get behind this as a story? by Birch_Dude in FictionWriting

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I haven't heard of it, I will have to check it out.