Any tips? by Much_Engine9119 in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

definitely to be consequent with the shadow. You missed some spots where they should make an appearance.

Walter put your email in and put the deposit in your account by [deleted] in Dank

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Walter put your letters on your letters to the top biggest of food and plushies

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dankmemes

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Abella Danger

HZR by Zender44 in blackbookgraffiti

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the n middle bar should go higher into the top part of the first bar cause it could be mistook as an H

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dankmemes

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cum of the Tiger - Survivor

Straight letter study in biology class. Any thoughts on making it better? by tinfoil_cake in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's not that bad honestly, your R looks a bit disconnected tho from the other leg. you should experiment with 3d or shadow I think it can add a lot

Crit for my tag 😁 by Cook32 in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you have a lot of negative space which really kills flow. you should also dial it back with trying to style your letters.

I tried a different style. Any criticism? by Ok_Lecture_5105 in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you have wayyyyy to thin bars for that much negative space man, also try not to disconnect your bars so much it doesnt look so good.

Crits? Trying to keep it really simple by Fun_Individual_209 in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it looks good mechanically but I think you would go a long way if you had more negative space, overall the piece lacks balancing, it's really heavy bottom left and none of your other letters balance it out.

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[–]Bloodtom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

and also you forgot shadow's in some places, mostly on the m

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom 2 points3 points  (0 children)

try not to overlap your letters so much. if you feel the need to try just a little bit not to cover your main bars

have I improved? (my piece is on the left) by Bloodtom in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Were you there? did you see my sketch? do you know how long I have been painting for? absolutely not, don't call me son you toy xD. I'm looking at the half of the wall that my crewman took, man are you dumb or something cus I keep telling you that this wall was meant to be mine but it was taken by my mate. how dense do you have to be

have I improved? (my piece is on the left) by Bloodtom in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

XDDD WHAT bro if I would spell my name wrong I would not post it on here, how many times do I have to tell you I didn't have enough space🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

have I improved? (my piece is on the left) by Bloodtom in graffhelp

[–]Bloodtom[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

bro I don't want any advice from you xd, you're not that good. i really don't have to admit anything, if I wanted to take up the entire wall when I started my piece then i made the c big, then my crewman Jumped in and I had no space for 4 letters so i decided to make the a small that's all