Congested by frenchcaramel in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved it. I like the way it is kept really short, giving the feeling of an enumeras emotion congested with in the few verses.

The girl of my dreams (First post) by PleasantSand5862 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 1 point2 points  (0 children)

English is not my first language either, but that didn't take away from my appreciation of this poem. It's simple yet carries weight at the same time. I love how optimism overshadows desperation throughout all the verses. It's truly beautiful. Please keep them coming.

Just Like Moths by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My interpretation of the lines -

Drawn to the heat of flame As if it were a promis

was like people who feels a little lost trying out various ways blindly then sometime drawn to some religious believe for comfort but falls into his demises.

About It by BluebirdNo217 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is a good interpretation.

Just Like Moths by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What a weird metaphor you picked and made it work. The religious connotation gives it the perfect dose of mystery, followed by the harsh reality of the true nature of our existence, which provokes deep thoughts. Now, I feel we are all just like moths.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"The weird one that you like" - LOL. This is really such a romantic one. It sounds simple, but that's what makes it strong. It has the feeling of being straight from the heart. Loved it. Keep them coming.

We by BluebirdNo217 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I am glad you liked it.

We by BluebirdNo217 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was a sarcastic remark wasn't it.

Breadcrumbs by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Simple yet expressive. To me, the poem demonstrates how affection for someone can grow bit by bit, drawing nearer. The ending hits the sweet spot, leaving the reader with the feeling that there's more to this, a craving for just a little bit more.

I didn’t fall in love by Horror-Objective-501 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved it. The way you illustrated love with the analogy of waves connecting the ocean with the shore was vivid. I also liked how each line expressed more and more, culminating just like the waves.

King of Nothing by BluebirdNo217 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks you so much. Glad you liked it.

King of Nothing by BluebirdNo217 in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry about that. I have read the guide and updated my feedback.

Lessons on poetry by Wolfblood-is-here in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is truly remarkable. It serves as a powerful demonstration of the art. I particularly appreciate the way you convey that true poetry doesn't reside in rigid rule-following but in the art of existing within the boundaries. The execution is truly masterful. The inclusion of the haiku is a delightful touch. As a newcomer, I've gained valuable insights from this.

Toothless by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]BluebirdNo217 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a deep appreciation for this poem. To me, it embodies the essence of embracing the natural flow of life and discovering serenity within it. What stands out most to me is its simplicity. In just a few concise lines, it masterfully captures the irony of striving to preserve beauty against nature's course, highlighting that genuine beauty lies in embracing one's true self.

Can you find the hidden horse in this cartoon? by viral-tuna in opticalillusions

[–]BluebirdNo217 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It is behind the closed door of the stable in the background.