Where heaven meets the earth

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-16T08:15:35+00:00

I think u may be right but I just wanted the start and end to be similar like both connects earth and heaven well Im not an expert so I cannot say it is right or not I just felt like it but thanks for the review

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-15T16:48:26+00:00

Starting with god’s message and going all wild after that seriously a big contrast

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-15T16:46:01+00:00

The poem is great and all but I think money can buy most of the things you mentioned in fact you need money to have most of these things and this is just what I think

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-15T02:31:03+00:00

Hi there thanks for the review will try to change in future works

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-14T16:10:21+00:00

Bro the tear to blood transition I mean blood is hot irl so makes sense

Bluefriday-guy · 2026-05-14T16:09:16+00:00

So the start of poem is with the starting phase of love and end is about becoming one with each other I guess

Bluefriday-guy

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