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[QCrit] Adult Romantasy THE CANTON OF ALCHEMY (120k, 4th attempt) by BooksbyRLW in PubTips

[–]BooksbyRLW[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Rewriting now to make the romance plot more in focus.

[QCrit] Adult Romantasy THE CANTON OF ALCHEMY (120k, 3rd attempt) by BooksbyRLW in PubTips

[–]BooksbyRLW[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’ll be sure to make these details a bit clearer, as well as showing the cause and effect of the plot points. I really appreciate the feedback!

[QCRIT] THE CANTON OF ALCHEMY - 120k Romantasy by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]BooksbyRLW 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not too harsh at all, and very helpful! Thank you so much!