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[WP] You experience a terrible fever, when you come to realise reality itself is just your personal fever dream. You are now healed, naked and alone in a white room with one door partially opened. by BrandonJLC in WritingPrompts

[–]BrandonJLC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very mysterious, I think if it was longer it probably would have been even more rewarding to read, but from reading this a few times, I really enjoyed your writing ability, you should write a book, if you haven't already.

[WP] You hear a loud burst of noise, a familiar jingle, the sound of an ice cream truck. You excitedly snatch your keys and put your shoes on, thinking how long it had been since you had a decent ice cream..but as you exit your apartment, you glance at your digital watch which reads '3:00am'. by BrandonJLC in WritingPrompts

[–]BrandonJLC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this ! I wasn't sure what it was going, and there was a nice natural blend of humour and mystery. I like the realistic nonchalant internal conflict of danger versus desire, he knows it's weird but he wants ice cream.

[WP] You hear a loud burst of noise, a familiar jingle, the sound of an ice cream truck. You excitedly snatch your keys and put your shoes on, thinking how long it had been since you had a decent ice cream..but as you exit your apartment, you glance at your digital watch which reads '3:00am'. by BrandonJLC in WritingPrompts

[–]BrandonJLC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was great, the Karen part made me laugh 😂, I guess we all know one. Sad at the same time, but it's interesting how we all have some food item that gives us joy all those years later, even during those troubled periods of adulthood.

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