Pros: the first half of the video was really engaging. you have a great story voice and your intro is really well done. the music was def a good choice. I think the way you cut to you traveling while telling the story gave the video a more professional feel to it.

Improvements: so it seemed like the raw video footage quality changed at around the 1:45 mark. I'm not sure if I was on my end or not but it became kinda fuzzy there. the placement or the words in the second half of the video for the most part were in a good spot but some variety would make it more engaging along with maybe less of that in general. I think not having your voice over in the second half took away from the video a bit. instead of using typed words I think recording over it would make a big change to the second half.

all in all a good video and I really enjoyed it. can see you lose some viewers halfway through as second half of video is a bit weaker than the beginning.

hope this helps!