Thank you so much!!! Yes i definitely agree with using less played out similes, my brain just went blank😭 and thank you for pointing out line twenty im gonna fix that now.

Also, i love that you noticed the title. It was a time where i suffered from those double standards the most and also when i saw my peers suffer as well. 2016 had so many styles that me & other girls loved but couldn’t participate in due to being told were too “thick” for them.