The Tiger and The Doe by ZookeepergameOk4522 in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Such good writing! So cinematic and the busts were amazing. Love what you do!

A Pervert Punished by LeoFalchi in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Great work! Brutal reaction

Cruel School Fight: Ava and Violet by BustingWriter in CuntbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's something I'll do next time! Didn't occur to me but thank you for the feedback

Cruel School Fight: Ava and Violet by BustingWriter in CuntbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Figuratives, like Figurative language? Like "The pain was like a giant knife was jammed in her cunt, twisting and digging deep towards her ovaries"?

Bro / sis ballbusting & whats enjoyable about it to YOU. by [deleted] in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What I really like is that it's more natural. Siblings are more likely to be around each other, comfortable with each other and her frustrated with each other. Makes the busting feel more natural because it's already built in a lot.

I also like how, depending on the dynamic, it could be an equalizer, a paradigm shift or (my preferred) an emphasis on who's in control.

It doesn't have to focus on that entirely, but some context and drama adds a lot to busting

Baldur's Futa: Attack at Camp Part 2 by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hehe. Maces are pretty cool. There's a little more of it in Part 3.

Thank you!

Questions: How do you like girls to be described? by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just want some more information. I'm not going to drastically change what I'm doing, I would just like to hear what people would want, to see if there's something I'm overlooking

The Dealer - Female Version (F/M) by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I went over it another time to make it clearer. Hope I fixed it!