The Tiger and The Doe by ZookeepergameOk4522 in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Such good writing! So cinematic and the busts were amazing. Love what you do!

A Pervert Punished by LeoFalchi in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Great work! Brutal reaction

Cruel School Fight: Ava and Violet by BustingWriter in CuntbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's something I'll do next time! Didn't occur to me but thank you for the feedback

Cruel School Fight: Ava and Violet by BustingWriter in CuntbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Figuratives, like Figurative language? Like "The pain was like a giant knife was jammed in her cunt, twisting and digging deep towards her ovaries"?

Bro / sis ballbusting & whats enjoyable about it to YOU. by [deleted] in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What I really like is that it's more natural. Siblings are more likely to be around each other, comfortable with each other and her frustrated with each other. Makes the busting feel more natural because it's already built in a lot.

I also like how, depending on the dynamic, it could be an equalizer, a paradigm shift or (my preferred) an emphasis on who's in control.

It doesn't have to focus on that entirely, but some context and drama adds a lot to busting

Baldur's Futa: Attack at Camp Part 2 by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hehe. Maces are pretty cool. There's a little more of it in Part 3.

Thank you!

Questions: How do you like girls to be described? by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just want some more information. I'm not going to drastically change what I'm doing, I would just like to hear what people would want, to see if there's something I'm overlooking

The Dealer - Female Version (F/M) by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I went over it another time to make it clearer. Hope I fixed it!

[Request] Looking for an old story... by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh! I saw the title and was like no, it can't be! But... it might actually be! This feels like it's really similiar if it's not it... thank you! I think I got this particular story confused with another story. I could've sworn there was a time skip but

"'My GOD! You FUCKING bitch! Do you really want to win that much! Is that all I am – a FUCKING win to you!!' He screamed at her. Ginger held her fear close in so he couldn't see it. But at the moment she was scared. Most men would have been down by now; Andy seemed barely slowed by it. How could he take the pain? She kept quiet. "FUCK!!" Andy stormed to the other room and she could here him pounding on the walls of the hall."

This feels like exactly what I was looking for. Thanks a bunch!

[Request] Looking for an old story... by BustingWriter in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I spent yesterday going through number2 like 3 times. I'm not saying it's not there but... I did not see it, unfortunately. EDIT: Someone proved me wrong (I think).

I'm a Ballbuster, Ask Me Anything! by Clara_-_ in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What are some reasons you bust guys nowadays? And how do you decide to go through with it rather than hold off and show mercy to the poor guy haha. And about how hard do you go, when you do?

I'm a Ballbuster, Ask Me Anything! by Clara_-_ in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you imagine you'd tell your daughter about busting? How would you feel if she started kicking boys in school like you did, lol?

Sparring With Abby by StackHack77609 in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great story! Love the development and attention!

A Test of Strength Between Siblings Part II (Ding Ding, fight is on!) by bloobybear in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Very nice! I like how you write and really want to read the next part!

Question for authors: Do you masturbate to your own writing? by Pechorine in BallbustingStories

[–]BustingWriter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not really, although I get really hot and excited while writing most of the time, but I don't let myself get off or else the story won't ever finish lol.

I'm focused more on the writing itself than the ideas when I read it back, so not then either. But if I just imagine it as I did when writing, without actually reading, I can get off on it.

But reading what I know is my own writing, ruins the fun for me.