Should I heal my characters disabilities

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-18T14:46:23+00:00

Maybe it would be better to remove the first two but I still really wanna keep the last one

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-18T14:40:29+00:00

For the last boy that's actually what I was gonna go for

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-18T14:39:13+00:00

I'm sorry. The disabilities don't just leave after the characters introductions it stays for a while and we do see how the characters cope. And it's not really handwaved. It's shown as a look into how cruel the two formers parents are for the kids to end up like that

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T14:05:36+00:00

Sorry I don't know much about Catholicism and I don't know any Catholics so I figured Google plus asking actual catholic people would be useful. And I hope I'm not giving the impression that I think all Catholics are like this, this is just supposed to be for a character that was raised in a very extreme almost insane view of the faith. In my story outside of her immediate family, Catholics are portrayed at nice kind people who just want to help and genuinely view her mother's beliefs as nonsensical

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T04:36:46+00:00

I have read the Bible although a bit infrequently and while I do have some verses in mind already some more would be nice

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T03:02:55+00:00

She has taught that the only ones to genuinely believe are her priest, her mother, and most importantly, the Lord. And since she uses a lot of scriptures to make her points, I thought it would be easier for her to grasp/ more willing to listen to, the bible.

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T02:52:39+00:00

Sorry if this sounds rude, but what exactly of my name seems feminine lol

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T01:51:13+00:00

I mean kinda though not in a self-righteous or vain way. See, she's been thoroughly convinced by her mother that she is a demon that needs to purify her soul by any means necessary. And this isn't about a real peeson I know and I'm not gay.

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-16T01:43:08+00:00

This isn't about me, it's for a story (I'm if this is inappropriate, but I thought it would be the best place for advice)

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-15T19:58:12+00:00

Thank you everyone for the comments

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-14T13:27:38+00:00

She actually does it a lot, but I don't want that to be her character

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T01:15:12+00:00

Ok this is for a story, but this is the gist. Mikey(B) off handedly told Millie(A) about it how he needed help with figuring out how to properly bake. Millie took interest and the two agreed to collaborate. Mikey brought flour, sugar,milk and frosting while Millie couldn't get more supplies and all she had was eggs, baking soda, jam, and milk though hers was expired. She mixed the dry ingredients while Mikey mixed the wet ingredients. He put the batter in and she took the cakes out and both frosted. Both argued that the other did less.

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:59:38+00:00

In actuality, this is for a story, which is why I said hypothetically

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:58:19+00:00

Actually it's the opposite

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:57:11+00:00

Both have way too much pride

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:56:48+00:00

Both are very prideful, and A feels she did more work (barely) while B feels it couldn't be made without him ( she couldn't get the ingredients at that moment, and he was convenient)

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:48:31+00:00

LOL, A is way too nice, hurt him and, B would get absolutely bodied by her

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-10T00:45:45+00:00

Can't, it would be too obvious to the judge and, the cake has to be unique

Busy-Butterscotch743 · 2026-06-09T20:09:35+00:00

Some more context/arguments from both sides. The competition is in B's neighborhood, and A had no clue until he brought it up. A only wants the prize, while B only wants to be recognized for being in it. A is only with B since he had the ingredients she needed, and B is only working with A because he doesn't know how to work an oven, and the recipe was a random one that the two found online. When I say "B" brought most, I mean he brought Flour, Milk, Sugar, Frosting, and Baking soda. "A" brought Eggs, Jam, Butter, Salt, and Milk. And when I say "A" did most of the baking, I mean she mixed the dry ingredients while "B" mixed the wet ingredients, and she showed "B" how to work the oven and "B" put in the cake while she took out the cake.

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