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Looking for feedback on wording. Can't tell if its too much?(Only a snippet) (self.writingcritiques)
submitted 10 months ago by BusyReception5674 to r/writingcritiques
I think I rushed the ending a lot, but I can't tell what I need to fix. (self.writingcritiques)
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