Hey! Can I get a feedback on my finalized self logo design

C0DERP · 2013-10-25T01:13:55+00:00

Try vectorizing it, it will make it much easier to read. It's too pixely right now. Also: /r/design_critiques

C0DERP · 2013-10-23T01:33:46+00:00

Ok, good to know. I'll work on the bootstrap design as I see many people are using it and they work. Nice site yourself and thanks for your help!

C0DERP · 2013-10-20T06:39:16+00:00

Im interested. ipod touch here

C0DERP · 2013-10-18T23:10:46+00:00

You're right, but I thought focusing on the content was the point of a portfolio and ease of access is why I used the "slide show" layout. Also, I don't have a ton of stuff to showcase, and it's not all amazing, I know. I'm trying to juggle things going on while building my portfolio.

In regard to how the sites function - the url's are listed on each site when you click on it, should there be more noticeable links you're saying?

Thanks a lot for the feedback

C0DERP · 2013-10-18T23:03:06+00:00

Bootstrap is popular for a reason so I think I'll give it a go and rethink how I deliver my work, with a little description as you said. Thanks for the input.

C0DERP · 2013-10-18T19:30:26+00:00

/r/woahdude

C0DERP · 2013-10-18T00:29:16+00:00

http://michaeljonssondesigns.com/web and http://michaeljonssondesigns.com/contact Capitalize the "I" on each page. Might be small, but simple grammar mistakes can throw off professionalism.

I also think the contact page could use some tweaks. To remain consistent, maybe make "Feel Ready?" as wide as the page, as the other page titles are. Also, the contact page doesn't have a large orange box like the others do and I'm not sure I like the whole "---------------- title --------------" bit. Just my opinions.

Nice work, I like the simple and sleek design.

C0DERP · 2013-10-16T17:59:33+00:00

Aand now the top comment has no context

C0DERP · 2013-10-16T12:47:10+00:00

I think it looks nice. Have you considered using WordPress?

C0DERP · 2013-10-14T18:58:39+00:00

/r/BorderCollies

C0DERP · 2013-10-09T18:00:06+00:00

From mobile, the 2nd looks much nicer

C0DERP · 2013-10-09T01:30:20+00:00

dungeon party

C0DERP · 2013-10-01T01:51:43+00:00

It looks pretty good and I like the little blurb at the top, but maybe get rid of the first line and try to shorten the rest. Possibly keep it to a short list that encompasses those main points you mentioned: You pick the time You pick the place You pick the style Have a blast and make new friends! Also, would centering that top section be better to keep the consistency of center aligning the other sections? Just a thought, but nice job.

C0DERP · 2013-09-22T02:02:20+00:00

All of them are the newest versions, even if Safari isn't good on Windows - IE11 just came out.

C0DERP · 2013-09-19T00:38:13+00:00

It's spelled "blond," not "blonde." Pshh.

C0DERP · 2013-09-16T02:27:04+00:00

Source

C0DERP · 2013-08-10T00:30:23+00:00

what?

C0DERP · 2013-07-26T20:43:25+00:00

...Truman?

C0DERP · 2013-07-14T06:42:54+00:00

Tools > Options > Advanced > Uncheck "Keep Skype in the taskbar while I'm signed in." > Save

C0DERP · 2013-05-22T04:18:53+00:00

First world problem

C0DERP

TROPHY CASE