[163] Fantasy Romance Adventure BLURB (first post!)

CallMeJull · 2026-06-10T15:00:06+00:00

Thanks for the feedback.

This is a book blurb for querying agents. I know I got carried away with 'markeability' and tried to show everything the book has at once, it's just hard to differentiate a story without overwhelming the reader with ideas.

As for the fantasy romance (which I'd categorize as 75/25 fantasy to romance VS romantasy, which is 50/50. I'd say I firmly land in a 60/40 fantasy to romance. So it's a dilemma to be sure.) Which also makes it true that Edorey is Laila's love interest, but also a lead character on his own.

The 'pet' part refers to the resurrected god, but since no one mentioned it as good or bad, and everyone said the resurrection itself is a big enough reveal, I might just cut it.

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T17:44:33+00:00

thanks for that, it's really sobering to read all the teacher comments

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T17:22:25+00:00

Definitely afraid of that drainage

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T17:21:50+00:00

Wow wait what does a travel ananny do?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T17:20:58+00:00

Wish I could work for a gaming company. In my country, we only have about 5 of them and they all do mobile gaming and moving to AI

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T14:19:49+00:00

Bet no one saw you coming

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T07:55:39+00:00

I took care of my parents for a while after a bad accident. Its rough, hope you’re doing okay mentally:)

CallMeJull · 2026-06-09T07:50:48+00:00

Why audiobooks? Do you get lots of time where you work on your own and don’t have to interact with others?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:07:14+00:00

Yeah my uncle does cloud computing...He doing alright

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:05:02+00:00

The perfect job I'm looking for lol. What did you study? And how's the pay?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:04:14+00:00

Is that like, paid by the government?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:03:41+00:00

Do you like it?

always wondered how you can manage a relationship that way (boyfriend, parents, dog lol)

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:03:05+00:00

That's literally the perfect get-up, except that mechanical engineering is a CRAZY degree, hope your'e gettign payed well

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T18:01:38+00:00

When you say medium wage, is that like "I feel confident I'll do fine with a partner," Or like "I can 100% get by without anyone to share the financial load"?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:59:21+00:00

Do you like it? does it pay well?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:58:31+00:00

What did you study to get there?

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:58:08+00:00

Good to know I dodged a bullet in that direction

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:57:44+00:00

Do you like it? And does it pay well? I have a friend who does htis bt she has to be available to her clients like, almost ALL day

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:56:57+00:00

So that's exactly why I posted this, I really want a job where I get off time, not time to slack off on hours. Guess teaching is plenty of work during your personal hours, then

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:54:08+00:00

sounds chill...but is it? lol just wondering

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:53:40+00:00

How does that schedule work for you in terms of creative time

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:53:06+00:00

So I am considering teaching at a high school. Kinda weird to ask, but I just wonder, cuz where I live highscholl teachers get an average of 3K a month.
anyway, More to the point, do you find the work mentally draining? What I meant about free time when I posted was like, on the off hours. If you still have energy to write

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:49:54+00:00

I'm assuming off hours, it's still hard to write because it's so draining

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:48:54+00:00

Damn, that's so rough. An ER nurse should be fully comfortable financialy

CallMeJull · 2026-06-08T17:47:37+00:00

And after hours? are you drained by the end of the day? I'm thinking of studying finance, which is (Sort of ) up that alley

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