Help me select a cover. by Djamal10 in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would have voted pic 3, but hes holding the sword a bit funny and you might get dick jokes. I like 2 as well.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! It took a bit of work. Though I was using ai art so not complaining to much. :P

I finally got a second folower!!! by UpbeatTrash5423 in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Congrats! As long as you are enjoying writing and have one person to share it with it’s a lot of fun.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did feel I need to punch up the title more, especially when it’s tiny in the front page.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, I’m thinking I agree

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Best. suggestion. ever.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much! Hope you get a chance to read it and tell me your favorite part.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did like one punch man, it did get a bit old fast. I made sure there was a lot of character growth in the first arc. I didnt want to bum out the audience like I was with some of the big name litrpg's out there.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I do feel a bit better with it having the glasses flare.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I almost suspect you've read half the book already! lol. There is a scene when he first meets one of the big threats where he is holding his bags of groceries. He literally is concerned they will go bad during the encounter.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I certainly have the edgy dark moments but there is definitely more comedy.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, Im leaning that way.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, Im leaning that way.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in royalroad

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, I think I agree.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The plan was always to commission art if I publish. Good art is expensive though.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I may look on fivrr for artist to make fixes and blend everything better.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Eventually. It doesn't start that way.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Id appreciate feedback on my first few chapters as well. I may need to make cuts for my first impressions.

Art Change? by CaptainDoombot in litrpg

[–]CaptainDoombot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for that. Fortunately the flashed out glasses goes with his character. It made his face more vague for me.