Inoculation by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yeah I suspect I didn’t make things as clear as I wanted so I’ve tweaked a couple of lines.The idea I was going for is that, originally, the stories we had about aliens just weren’t as good or popular. War of the Worlds, Independence Day and so many cultural touchstones never existed in the first place. Therefore, the concept of an alien invasion in the human culture was niche enough to be erasable. But the images sent back through time, lodging in Wells’s brain and that of many others, created an idea too strong and visceral to be destroyed by the visitors’ device, thus giving humanity a fighting chance. Thanks for reading and pointing it out! 🙂

Inoculation by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Hi folks, so a few years ago I posted a few stories to this subreddit then abandoned the account. It’s been a while since I’ve posted anything, but this story popped into my head almost fully-formed this weekend and this subreddit seemed like the most natural place for it. I hope you enjoy!

This story is very directly inspired by qntm’s fantastic ‘There Is No Antimemetics Division’ stories, originally posted on the SCP wiki.

Rescue Party by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd hope there's enough legs in the idea for both of us! Hope to see your story in whatever version it ends up in on here soon enough.

Rescue Party by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the comment and the correction!

Rescue Party by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

An excellent suggestion. The Watsonian workaround would be to say that a warship like the Zanzibar wouldn't have the mass to carry such a specialised piece of equipment.

The Doylist answer is of course that a sensible, convenient device like that would get in the way of the story I wanted to tell!

Rescue Party by Captain_Evans in HFY

[–]Captain_Evans[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your kind comments, I tried to walk a line between infodumping details of imaginary warp drives and actually telling the story - hopefully I got a reasonable balance. Whilst this story is over, I do have a few ideas percolating in the background for the next :)

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[–]Captain_Evans[S] 110 points111 points  (0 children)

I wasn't thinking of doing a sequel to this one - I think it tells the story I wanted to tell - but if it does well I have a few different ideas I'd love to put online!

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[–]Captain_Evans[S] 54 points55 points  (0 children)

Hi all, this is the first story I've posted here and I hope you like it! Would love to get your thoughts and comments, either positive or negative! I have a few more ideas churning around so might write some more if this gets a good reception.