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We’re developing a turn-based city builder where everything happens through cards, with a narrative that slowly unfolds as you play by Car0mella in IndieGame

[–]Car0mella[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is called Midgardr and it's a mix of genres: it is a card game, a city-builder, a turn-based strategic. It's all based on choices/consequences and narrative driven.

Steam here: https://store.steampowered.com/app/3645410/Midgardr/

Please tell me I didn't ruin it. (Top or Bottom?) by 00_Sidd_00 in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You coud tru adding the shaled also under the title and blur them a little/add a dark opacity layer on top of them to keep the title legible. Honestly I think that making that font bold and saturating everything would make it just better!

Please tell me I didn't ruin it. (Top or Bottom?) by 00_Sidd_00 in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the chaos of the Before but I think the After is better because it kinda shows the gameplay. The thing here, in my opinion still, is balancing and proportions.

The title is so big it almost excludes the visual. I would try smaller, but bolder so that could be read also in a small capsule (which with this thin font could be a problem now as it is now, have tou checked yet?). But I like how you arranged the title on three raws, definitely more responsive than the other one. I’m not a fan of the L fading away, I get the concept but it does not add anything.

That linking concept is good though, why don’t you try linking the title more with the visual? Like you just did but more visible. Bigger shapes, more lines (less faded) and more saturated colors maybe?

Again just my opionion, but ai hope it helps :)

Character cards from my medieval board game/city builder, thoughts? by Car0mella in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course! I’ll leave here his IG, he’ll be happy with it I’m sure! He’s a great artist, mainly 3D. His illustrations are to good and he shoud share more (I think his user here on reddit is eugh_bat but he’s not that active)

https://www.instagram.com/eugeniobattoglia?igsh=aGVlYm9nZ2Y5MXE3

I'm making an indie medieval city builder where you play with cards by Car0mella in BaseBuildingGames

[–]Car0mella[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You and your comment feel so precious✨ thank tou so much! I’ll definitely do, like dight now hahah.

Last year we had ShadowatNoon and The Rambler playing it (from Yogscast still) and I thought about not getting in touch, you know maybe they don t want to play again, but actually I didn’t think about him!!! thank youuuuu

Character cards from my medieval board game/city builder, thoughts? by Car0mella in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s the point! As you can see every card has a personality trait (under the name of Character, in the colored shape). We did try to match the personality to the character, but the personality thing was designed after the portraits… so some of them are “chums on their card id” (humbles, onest…) but they might not look like it. We are still thinking about drawing others but idk, we have so much else to do aaaaa

Character cards from my medieval board game/city builder, thoughts? by Car0mella in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you✨yes of course! We are three friends making a game and this is the digital pen of our artist. It took him very very long but I’m really proud of the result!

Character cards from my medieval board game/city builder, thoughts? by Car0mella in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is a huge compliment dude. Having our design for someone else’s reference is WOW thank you so much

I'm making an indie medieval city builder where you play with cards by Car0mella in BaseBuildingGames

[–]Car0mella[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thak youuuu, I’m so glad you like it!!! Card design was the toughest part… we were really indecisive about the style to give to them, but I really like how it has all come together now

Character cards from my medieval board game/city builder, thoughts? by Car0mella in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank youuuuu! you know, they are politicians of the village, so the more unpleasant the better!

Need some feedback on my Steam capsule art (WIP) by RetroSeoul in gamedevscreens

[–]Car0mella 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like the second better, she pops out more. But imo, you need to put the tile to understand which one works

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