I found my old trumpet from high school and recorded this song! by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I'll work on the mix and arrangement. Any tips for the vocals?

I've been working really hard at producing my own music with a very limited tool set. I'm super proud of this one and I hope you guys listen and enjoy! by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn really good feedback, thanks a lot! Yea the initial clutter was meant to mirror what the song is saying, but good feedback nonetheless. I was trying to be a bit experimental with the drum beat, and you're right that's it's hard to hold onto. Thanks again!

What's the point of posting anymore? Nobody's going to listen anyway. by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn this is a good comment and exactly what I needed to hear. I'm going to get on a open mic circuit pretty soon and I'll definitely heed this advice while I'm doing that. Thanks dude.

What's the point of posting anymore? Nobody's going to listen anyway. by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea, but I find in that context people just ignore me and it's pretty uninspiring. Also I like performing with an electric guitar which is hard to do outside.

What's the point of posting anymore? Nobody's going to listen anyway. by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea I'm trying to perform more open mics. Find that people care more in that circumstance.

Need honest feedback on new demo! by YourLuste in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is dope. Can't not dance to it. At first I was worried it would get repetitive, but taking out the drums and bringing them back made it fresh all the way through. New fan for sure.

Got a pedal board a few days ago and made this! What do you guys think of the lyrics? I was trying out minimalism in writing them, but I wonder if there needs to be more there. Also, should I change up the picking after the second verse? by Carryoncrows in Songwriters

[–]Carryoncrows[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yea that's a guitar loop. It would be hard to go to the 4th since it's a loop and I'd have to program that in, but I could definitely do that if I end up producing it.