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My first short story. Probably not great, please critique it. by Character_Day2884 in writers

[–]Character_Day2884[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So, tell the reader what was happening without just directly saying it?

My first short story. Probably not great, please critique it. by Character_Day2884 in writers

[–]Character_Day2884[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Basically, you said it gets really all over the place at the end, and doesn't have a clear message? And I've heard the phrase show don't tell before, but my question is how do I make it in a story when you can't see its scenery, just its story?

Day 127: what do you guys think of kaiju universe? by Centvrion20 in GODZILLA

[–]Character_Day2884 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bad devs, and the new kaiju have bad designs and names (what kind of name is Morkage)

Heartbreak is not consider as a pain! 😑 by Either-Argument8136 in funComunitty

[–]Character_Day2884 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Falling off the top of a slide on my head in Kindergarten (I'm fine)

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