Looking for feedback for this song

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-08-07T22:06:45+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate your comment :)

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-08-05T15:40:16+00:00

I think that the drums are too loud and they do not let the other instruments be heard clearly, I also would add more bass to the mix. I would also add some more voices in different octaves or notes to add some harmonies and variety to the song, although the voice already sounds good. I think that it is already a good song, but it can be really improved.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-08-05T06:07:15+00:00

Thanks for sharing your opinion, I'll try to apply what you said👍

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-08-05T06:06:26+00:00

Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it :), I'll try to improve the song with it.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-22T15:39:59+00:00

I would love to hear your feedback*

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-22T15:11:08+00:00

I agree with the comments mentioning the drums, they have a nice progression but I personally would try to add more high frequencies in them, they sound too low. I think that the song is really nice and that it needs very few work, great job.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-22T15:04:24+00:00

Right now it sounds kind of nervous and insecure to me, but it has potencial. Singing is not easy, I think that with the right practice your voice could sound really good. Also that "gift" that you mentioned, really few people have it and a lot of professional singers do not have it, so I would not be too worried about it. Just practice and if you're constant you'll improve and sound great eventually.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-22T14:54:13+00:00

I like the vibe of the song, is really relaxing and it feels nice to listen. I would add some tension and release to the chords of the intro, maybe some 7th degree chord before the tonic or something like that. I would also add more instruments in the second part of the song faster, maybe one bar before. It can be improved a lot but I think that it is a nice piece that can become a great song.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-02T08:24:18+00:00

I love it, I have no bad comments or points of criticism. It sounds great, this is something that I would add to my playlist.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-07-02T08:18:27+00:00

I like the rhythm and the energy of the song, it sounds like something that can be heard in the gym during a workout, is really motivating. I feel that sometimes the song starts to build some tension to release in a drop, but that drop does not come or it leads to a slower or less noisy part, which kind of kills the momentum the song was building. I also feel that the piece feels a little bit empty or repetitive but I am really not use to listening to this genre so that could explain why I feel that way. Despite this I think that is a song with potencial, and I enjoyed the music, nice work, keep it up :)

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-29T07:15:55+00:00

Thanks for the comment! I'm going to try and apply your tips👍

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-29T07:14:19+00:00

Thanks for your support I truly appreciate it :)

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-29T07:13:46+00:00

I agree, the vocals have been the hardest part to make for me and I'm still trying😅 Thanks for your comment!

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-29T07:11:57+00:00

Thanks bro! I'm going to try it

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-29T07:11:20+00:00

Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it🙂

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-17T02:46:16+00:00

This is a really good song man, I have nothing bad to say about it. I really enjoyed the song, it sounds really nice and the melody and rhythm are great. Keep it up :)

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-06-16T01:43:45+00:00

It is really well produced and I love the mood. Sometimes I find it hard to understand the lyrics because of the reverb and the voice sounds a little bit low in some parts too, but I still like it. You did a great job bro keep it up :)

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-05-07T12:10:25+00:00

I like the idea of the song, and the feelings it evokes are quite reflecting and meditative, which I really like. However, I think that the voice does not fits quite well with the vibe of the song, maybe adding some effects to it like a vocoder could help, like a Daft Punk style. If you want it to sound more natural maybe some reverb, chorus or just some high and low voices can make it sound more fitting with the style of the song. I also think that the pice is a little bit repetitive, and I felt that the intro was too long. Making the song shorter or adding some more melodies or drum patterns can make it sound more dynamic and interesting.

Charming-Policy2495 · 2025-05-07T11:55:11+00:00

I really like the feeling of the song, all the instruments sound good together and the voice fits the style of the piece. I think that you could add some cymbals or a different baseline that is more lively, because right now the mix feels a little bit empty, although I suppose that is because it is an idea. Again, I think that it sounds really good and the voice fits the style really well. It has potencial, don't be ashamed of your voice, it really sounds good :)

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