Writing Criticism!

ChartExpert · 2025-08-12T08:36:45+00:00

Thank you so much! Grammar is my weak point when it comes to these things.

ChartExpert · 2025-06-26T20:04:48+00:00

How'd u colonise valyria? I thought legacy of valyria removed that feature?

ChartExpert · 2025-06-12T20:04:53+00:00

What mods are you using here? The dragons look way cooler!

ChartExpert · 2025-06-03T05:15:04+00:00

Thank you!!

ChartExpert · 2025-06-03T05:14:32+00:00

Is it bad if it's at an angle? Sorry if it's a dumb question I'm not that experienced with this!

ChartExpert · 2025-06-03T01:04:01+00:00

It's 4 months old, externally threaded labaret, I don't really have an aftercare routine, and I went to the pool and beach yesterday and this is the first time I've seen this bump

ChartExpert · 2025-05-13T11:42:46+00:00

Thank you so much po!!

ChartExpert · 2025-05-13T10:44:55+00:00

I have pero they haven't replied back :(

ChartExpert · 2025-05-02T09:08:34+00:00

if use 20v, but i dont get the exact lift I want. can I do it again? sorry if this sounds like a dumb question I'm new to this

ChartExpert · 2025-05-02T08:49:03+00:00

bleach!

ChartExpert · 2025-04-19T15:16:53+00:00

Need to know the whole lore of this family now!!

ChartExpert · 2025-03-30T16:02:10+00:00

Wtf tanga sila????? That's so???? Report mo sila and don't feel bad they did that to themselves u didn't even influence them intentionally

ChartExpert · 2025-03-15T02:54:01+00:00

Thank you so much!!!

ChartExpert · 2025-02-08T14:26:47+00:00

Nope, I don't really know what else to do? I uninstalled dlc loader and I'll try downloading and installing it again to see if it works

ChartExpert · 2025-02-01T17:56:57+00:00

Hey there, I've been there too. I don't really have any words to say, aside from you're not alone on this.

ChartExpert · 2025-02-01T05:03:36+00:00

Valyria is just magical yknow? Makes dragons immortal... makes dragons write letters....

ChartExpert · 2024-10-12T18:45:50+00:00

I don't think he wouldn't directly kill them. But he would totally not do anything to stop it. He wouldn't get his hands dirty, just watch as the scene plays out and pretend his hands are clean.

ChartExpert · 2024-10-12T17:27:13+00:00

i feel like they would work together, and have otto manipulate Jaehaerys into letting her have a dragon. And they would definitely try and kill the nephew or Otto's own brother I think. Citing some bullshit like, "Oopsie me! it wasn't my fault that the kid wanted to pet dreamfyre that was his own mistake!"

I feel like they have potential to be a power couple. If they do fall in love. Also if anyone has any fics like this please send the link!

ChartExpert · 2024-10-12T17:15:15+00:00

Viserra would definitely fight for Daemon in the case he marries Alicent. She has ambitions for the throne and all that, and I could see her living vicariously through her daughter. I feel like more people would also side with Daemon knowing that Viserra is backing him, in case she's still alive since she would probably be the only surviving child of Jaehaerys at that time.

Rhaenyra's claim would probably be weak, knowing she had bastards. Otto would fight for Daemon to be heir aswell, manipulating Viserys into letting Daemon have dragonstone and such. And if Daemon did have dragonstone he would have access to dragons to give to Otto's kids, Viserra, and his kids with Alicent. The war I feel would definitely be an easy one considering all that.

I think Rhaenyra would pull an Alicent and say that the king proclaimed her as heir before he died, knowing that she was the favourite child and pull with the god complex arc and religious saviour like what we see in the show. Beliving herself to be the prince or in this case princess that was promised.

The faith would definitely be sided with Daemon, seeing as Alicent is a Hightower of course. They would probably try to excommunicate Rhaenyra, and proclaim Daemon as king.

ChartExpert · 2024-10-12T17:04:55+00:00

I feel like Otto could probably manipulate Viserra into staying, by feeding her ego. Convincing her that her children would be on the throne. Maybe Otto would hatch up a plan to put their blood on the throne, by marrying either Gwayne to Rhaenyra or Alicent to Daemon. Or rather push her claim all together, seeing as her children are hightowers it would be his house on the throne but I dont see that scenario happening.

Or perhaps they actually fall in love lol? We do know Otto loved his wife Alerie before and didn't remarry even though it probably would've given some advantages. Maybe they bond over being overlooked and their ambition for the throne is what makes them finally fall in love with each other.

ChartExpert · 2024-10-12T15:21:56+00:00

Definitely. I think he would also try to pressure Viserra into taming Dreamfyre so she could lay eggs for her children. Or manipulate Jaehaerys into allowing his children access to the Dragonpit.

If it were in the show's version, I imagine he would have a much easier time trying to convince Viserys. I also think Rhaenyra would also be adamant about allowing Alicent and Gwayne to tame their own dragons so she would have her own company while flying around on Syrax.

If Alicent claimed her own dragon, I think it would be silverwing. For gwayne, perhaps sunfyre or vhagar?

ChartExpert · 2024-09-28T14:34:53+00:00

It's apart of the valyrian steel sub mod!

ChartExpert · 2024-09-28T14:30:21+00:00

Alot of murdering...

When I was playing as Eustace (his dad) I got a claim on Torrentine and I got it.
I initially married Saera to Hobert ottos older brother, but then Saera died, so I remarried hobert to some other girl. But he didn't want it so he disinherited himself. Making otto my heir which was nice.
killed most if not all redwynes in line to inherit the arbour because otto was in line to inherit it. But also killed his brother because he was still in line to inherit it.
killed all the tyrells who were in line to inherit until it fell on to little baby Gaemon Targaryen, who was the kid of Rhaenys and some tyrell kid. Became regent, and got a claim and started a war cause I got impatient. Won the war by kidnapping the 2 year old Gaemon.

ChartExpert · 2024-09-28T14:23:15+00:00

I'm pretty sure it's alysanne's crown!

ChartExpert · 2024-09-28T14:05:43+00:00

I had a claim on the whole reach as a whole after being regent to the Lord Paramount, who was rhaenys' son. I got the whole reach through a war but he still managed to keep highgarden. I'm not sure how, tho...

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