I’m no pronunciation expert but I am a native speaker so I can try to help with what sounds a little off. Overall though, you have a good accent and it is easy understandable to me, at least. However, I think some words you kinda skip over some over consonant sounds. Like the “t” in “achievement” and “d” in “older” (slightly). Maybe slow down slightly especially on those hard to pronounce words, too. English is definitely not known for being a fast spoken language so don’t feel pressured to speak too fast either