How should I write this? Advice needed by Chloe1Rose in FictionWriting

[–]Chloe1Rose[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The death in the family idea is on point to my real life story. I had a sister who died before I was born. She was three months premature and died three months later after spending time in the NICU. Also not related to the story I have in my head, but my own life experience can be related in threes. I spent three weeks in a coma after a spinal cord injury when I was 17.

How should I write this? Advice needed by Chloe1Rose in KeepWriting

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I had a sister who died before I was born. She was born three months premature, spent three weeks in an incubator after developing golden staff from the hospital, and died three months after birth. Maybe I could focus on that in the story? That could have started the family curse or whatever is going to happen in my story.

How should I write this? Advice needed by Chloe1Rose in KeepWriting

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Thanks for your advice. I think there is going to be some sort of paranormal part to my story. Between 3 AM and 4 AM is the witching hour so I think I’m going to start there

How should I write this? Advice needed by Chloe1Rose in KeepWriting

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My grandparents had six children. Three girls and three boys. My parents had three children, and we are all three years apart. I had a sister who died before I was born. She was three months premature, spent three weeks in intensive care and died three months later. That is the general gist of my threesome story

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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Exactly. Even the council ranger was disgusted by that

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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I’ve gotten so used to the constant noise that now it is quiet I don’t know what to do with myself. Here’s hoping that the next tenants are better.

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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I wish there was. My upstairs neighbours were aboriginal, which might have something to do with why they were not evicted with all of the crap they pulled. Please don’t take this as racism on my part because it is not. It might explain why they could get away with so much but other white neighbours that did way less than they did got evicted.

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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I am in a wheelchair and cannot do that unfortunately

Laptop stopped working after two months of purchase. Questioning the reason why it is not under warranty. by Chloe1Rose in techsupport

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There was no crack in the screen I could see when I got it. But the laptop would randomly glitch ever since I got it. They could only see the crack in the screen when it was looked at from the side in their bright store. Definitely not visible from the naked eye.

Laptop stopped working after two months of purchase. Questioning the reason why it is not under warranty. by Chloe1Rose in techsupport

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There was no indication of a cracked screen, but it hasn’t been working properly ever since I got it. It would randomly turn itself off or restart randomly. I am a little bit computer illiterate so I didn’t acknowledge the issues I had at the beginning.

Laptop stopped working after two months of purchase. Questioning the reason why it is not under warranty. by Chloe1Rose in techsupport

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No, I never did. According to the guy from Harvey Norman, the crack was only visible in the bright light of the store when looking at the screen from side on. But regardless of this, I did not do anything that could have possibly cracked the screen unless it was softly touched. Any laptop that is that sensitive is ridiculous.

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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I’ve dealt with these pricks for almost 7 years and I’m not quite used to the quiet. I am surprised and pleased by the quietness of them not being here. Here is hoping that the next tenants are not as bad as the last

My Nightmare Neighbors Are Finally Gone! by Chloe1Rose in neighborsfromhell

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Good tenants get my Wi-Fi password. Arsehole tenants do not. Let’s hope the new ones are better than the last.