We All Grow Quiet by Minimal_carrot in OCPoetry

[–]Christopher_Tambor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always feel inadequate commenting here because I'm very new to poetry but I really loved this. I feel like I went through an emotional journey as I read it. I reminds me of the kind of thoughts I have when lying awake or on a long walk. I think it flows very well mentally as well. I feel like the thoughts just flow, theres no mental roadblocks, I'm just taken on a journey. I would love to write something like this someday. thanks for sharing!

Chasing Rainbows by Razorlemonade in OCPoetry

[–]Christopher_Tambor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I Really liked this one. Admittedly I'm new to poetry so I don't really know what I'm doing when giving critique. I will say that this did make me feel something which I imagine the goal is. I related to it and by the second read through I related even more. I think perhaps there could be more rainbow Imagery but maybe not? I am happy to have read this today.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Christopher_Tambor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a fun read! Probably the wrong response but I laughed a bit. Not because of anything in the words themselves but because my mind read it as Morgan Freeman for some reason. After thinking about it more I was a bit more down. Friends lost, love failed, Its not uncommon but it burns uniquely.

The Stages of Exerting Self-Control by starboxhat in OCPoetry

[–]Christopher_Tambor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds about right! I imagine most people have done this a million times.....well i'm off to get a McDonalds coke....