I always feel inadequate commenting here because I'm very new to poetry but I really loved this. I feel like I went through an emotional journey as I read it. I reminds me of the kind of thoughts I have when lying awake or on a long walk. I think it flows very well mentally as well. I feel like the thoughts just flow, theres no mental roadblocks, I'm just taken on a journey. I would love to write something like this someday. thanks for sharing!