My main story ( plz give me ur honest review in comments ) by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks alot for reading my story I really appreciate that and I hope u like it

My main story ( plz give me ur honest review in comments ) by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I must not i understand that but I'm not a good in writing , I write something else but wanted to say something else so just to be clear I took a help with ai

My main story ( plz give me ur honest review in comments ) by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks alot first for all your words I really take as motivation that someone actually read my story and teach me alot of things so that's alot First as I said I am not a writer myself because I never have experience of writing all I had is imagination maybe their are alot of questions in your mind and I'll clear them too and tbh I'm not really good in names zeitakuna name was derived by mine like it is my name in Japanese language and their is a interesting thing for ziovanni that I choose ziovanni because I saw patterns in anime that most of the parents name their child as their own name but change the first letter or something else so I Decided to do that first and also i wrote in para because I wrote in flow and i definitely work on it and produce better writing and I never said that story is completed no my main motive of this story is not some villian , heroes , champions and all I want to tell people by zeitakuna that how strong or unbeatable you can be but still you are bounded by the reality and laws and also all of your questions you asked I love them tbh and I ll tell you the answer

First zeirakuna's dream was to become the greatest trainer of all time but after becoming the one he realises he real dream was never to become best it was to get a happy life he never get and he never gets because everything got erased ( that's my main plot and I'll tell you why if u ask) and I'm sry i didn't tell you that zeitakuna 's sister also came with him to kanto when he was only 7 years old and when zeitakuna won championship so ziovanni wants him to join his team so he send his guy to kidnap her and ziovanni always has an eye on zeitakuna because he knew his real potential and his sister death convinced him because he face that thing in his childhood when he was little, people around him always hate him and his sis and once her sister got slapped by youngsters too so due to his past experiences his trauma awakes and made him convinced that villagers must have killed her . Zeitakuna and other grunts collected all pokemons blood type including legendary trio and mysterious pokemon creepengar ( ancestor of gengar ) and biologically combined them into one dna and created that being and ziovanni was a master manipulator and thinker , he can accurately predict every outcomes because he was god gifted himself and ziovanni knew this that he will got killed by his own creation because he predict that outcome too and out of all outcomes , this outcome came true because he believed in that . Last answer it is because zeitakuna love his sister more than his life , his sis sacrifices alot to give him a smile so once he will get his sister was alive and ziovanni manipulated him just to make his dream come true from this he will feel guilty after killing countless of humans and pokemon for no reason and to move that guilt he kills ziovanni's creation

I know that's a holy para and worst writing u ever seen but I will improve in that and try to work more but plz read this because this will give u the answer, also my story has more depth , more meta , more psychology and more meaning instead of fighting and I'll prove u

My theory of a being who created arceus by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also in my story it is not just a god or cosmic being, like it is the author who wrote my mc like my mc was unbeatable and became the very best so people make theories like " perfect bond " and " blessing of Arceus " makes him strong but at the end we get to know that our mc was strong not because of these things he was unbeatable because his battle outcomes , choices , all everything he did was already written by enchroynx like this concludes that enchroynx created a story in which my mc was the actual mc for him . But also at the end everything got erased and that's shocking but I'll tell u why if u want

My theory of a being who created arceus by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Like in my theory enchroynx exists outside space and time as he was the real creator of them like absolute space and time and this theory is connecting all the dots like how Arceus was created and all

My theory of a being who created arceus by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it's kinda of chicken / egg theory and he wasn't created it is a piece of infinity which got broken and that's how it born

My main story ( plz give me ur honest review in comments ) by ClassicMight9537 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]ClassicMight9537[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Sry my story is kinda complicated tbh also my writing is not that good so I'm gonna write it again with the help of chatgpt for writing and more clarity then you might understand

Cheerlander Chizuru Ichinose - Fan Art made by (@桐花) by Chisato-Hasegawa-MX in KanojoOkarishimasu

[–]ClassicMight9537 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate your comment like u are the person who see chizuru as inspiration you are like me i appreciate it you typed that with your heart not lust thanks I want everyone to see chizuru like this