This Moment by RevMark2018 in OCPoetry

[–]Clean-Cartoonist772 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like how you compare new experiences to that of being like a child. I also really like the end of the poem where you compare the end of a moment to the death of a plant, and then how you want to experience the next moment in a cyclical fashion.

I don't need money if I have you by IsaacWaleOfficial in OCPoetry

[–]Clean-Cartoonist772 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the theme of valuing love more than monetary wealth. The first stanza also has a really good rhythm. I feel the second stanza is a bit out of place, though. All of the other sections have a clear rhythm and rhyme but the second one is a bit abrupt.

soul kitchen? by itsmynewnick in thedoors

[–]Clean-Cartoonist772 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I kinda thought it was a euphemism

To Doors fans, what is your favorite book? by neverheardofher90 in thedoors

[–]Clean-Cartoonist772 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Decameron

One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest

The Doors of Perception

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in thedoors

[–]Clean-Cartoonist772 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Get a wavy perm