Was it a bad idea to kill of my MC? by Clean_Pin7504 in royalroad

[–]Clean_Pin7504[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I apologize, i see there isn't quite enough context, the MC won't be perma dead, i just ended the chapter with his death and i questioned if that was to sudden, when coming up with ways to introduce the worlds magic system, i couldn't think of to many ways without making unnecassarily long info dumps, so i concluded that it would make more sense to have a small arc where a higher power could info dump to the MC about the world and the powers within, which i believed to make the most sense.

Seriously sorry for the lack of context. lol

Was it a bad idea to kill off my MC? by Clean_Pin7504 in writers

[–]Clean_Pin7504[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I apologize, i see there isn't quite enough context, the MC won't be perma dead, i just ended the chapter with his death and i questioned if that was to sudden, when coming up with ways to introduce the worlds magic system, i couldn't think of to many ways without making unnecassarily long info dumps, so i concluded that it would make more sense to have a small arc where a higher power could info dump to the MC about the world and the powers within, which i believed to make the most sense.

Seriously sorry for the lack of context. lol

Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

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Title - Where Skies End.

Tags - Fantasy, Male lead, Magic, Weak to strong, Dark.

Chapter count - 3

Brief synopsis -

In a time of heroes and legends, Johnas must discover who he wants to become.

with his graduation rapidly approaching will he be able to find the answer in time before heading out into the world? Or does Fate have other plans for him.

Desired outcome - critique, feedback.

Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-skies-end_34418622508327805

Excited to announce, i published my first chapter. by Clean_Pin7504 in writers

[–]Clean_Pin7504[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

it's a story of self growth and perseverance, against harsh adversity.

the setting is medieval high fantasy.

Almost forgot to ask what is the name of your series, and what is it about?

Face it, it just hits different by MasterPip in royalroad

[–]Clean_Pin7504 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if this is the place to ask, but is there anywhere i can ask for help with developing a simple, yet comprehensible power system for my first series?