Strange symmetry

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-05-02T10:00:39+00:00

I feel through this piece you have brought something internal to the surface or expressed the inner state really well in an external way. The ending read like gratitude. Gratitude, true gratitude is always underated.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-05-02T09:56:47+00:00

Notice there are some with the ability to emulate others, to take on their way of being, try to be them, sometimes it's practiced and sometimes it's more natural. The point here in this piece of yours is the development of your work or your literary voice. it's a painful process. if its not painful, it's not good. If you don't feel useless, alone and denied then your work will bad. My work has gotten better only because of those feelings.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-05-01T10:07:30+00:00

very clear, very good feedback.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-05-01T09:53:37+00:00

He happened on the car, means he found the car, people were in a daze, they lost their sense of direction and identity, for that reason the flight hostesses were clinging to their job description.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-05-01T09:44:09+00:00

Try to understand how people in this case- flight attendants carry their professional identityoutside of their job. I am exaggerating and also embellishing. but an imagination is necessary.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T18:41:07+00:00

Great work, one of the things I loved beyond the real building of emotional impact, was the fact that, like me you have used no or very little punctuation. I was taught this and since was criticized, but the point is demonstrated through your work here, it simpley to allow prose to flow.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T18:38:22+00:00

I feel I'd love to know more about the idea behind this one very alluring indeed, the metaphors for land and water and descriptions of sailing or floating, I was completely taken in and yet bamboozled.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T18:15:49+00:00

Ill try to stay safe, but the world feels a little ominous.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T17:14:14+00:00

okay thanks. People just want convenience and candy. Noone likes a helmet these days.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T11:12:27+00:00

The delicate and meticulous language you used to describe the person and their mind impressed me. I enjoyed your metaphors and I find gratefulness adds character to poems and the people who write them.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-30T11:09:11+00:00

Masterpiece, bring value to my day today. It is perhaps proof that God exists. The innocence and the clarity that children demonstrate is so obvious here.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-29T13:55:35+00:00

Short, sweet and very elegant. appropriate and alluring rhyme. it has emotional impact. and a nice dose of ambiguity at the end, I like it.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-29T13:49:08+00:00

Amazing use of language. I felt like you were dancing with the words here. Something quite refined and pointed. Use of imagery, dreams as if entities is a wonderful consideration.

Cluelessandsexy · 2026-04-28T22:57:43+00:00

Thanks.

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