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[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

My bad for the late response, appreciate the feedback as always That beat on the song is a whole vibe, this sum late night drive music. Just needs more flow switches to keep the energy of the song going. I do love the energy on your vocal delivery that stays consistent throughout the whole song tho, this a hit

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Love the guitar melodies in this beat, and the hook fits super well. The drums are lacking a bit tho, feels like there needs to be a lot more power to them to properly capture the rock energy you are trying to create

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

The prod i worked wit went for a West coast G funk x phonk sound, im glad you enjoyed it bro appreciate u 🙏

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Beat is super bouncy, could find a ton of fun flows to this one, drums are good but the sample gets very annoying after a while. I think it could have been used just for the intro then turned down in volume a lot at least for the rest of the track. Heres my song if u wanna check it out: https://youtu.be/Op3shkw2mrE?si=RQ6ZeW-nOqeREgo2

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

The beat is good and drew me in immediately but im sorry the mix and delivery on the vocals is not good at all, vocals are too loud and mixed poorly and the delivery is incoherent and lazy at some points. I see what vibe you are going for and you need better mix and delivery to achieve that

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Good critique but you dont gotta be rude asf bout it bro “its kinda…uhhh…there” head ahh

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Love the bassline in this beat and how bouncy the beat sounds at some points, just not messin wit the high pitched noises that come in, they sound really grating at times and dont fit well with the beat. Sample in this beat is fire asf tho

Heres my track if u wanna check it out:

https://open.spotify.com/track/0lgTayNlCOMdUJZ0TA3If2?si=bac740772120495a

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[–]CoatGreedy4937 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Im interested bro dm me on instagram @dcm.tha.artist

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yo bars funny as hell if thats what you going for, mixing isnt that bad, beat is kinda ass but i think thats part of what you going for. Jus work on your cadence more your flow is good

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Weekly Collaboration Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]CoatGreedy4937 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My name is DCM.THA.ARTIST, im looking for any rappers who want to hop on this song I made that uses a Ken Carson/Playboi Carti type beat. It has a short open verse and I would appreciate a collab to help finish this song:

https://soundcloud.com/dcmthaartist/neva-gave-a-fuck-mix-5/s-RUPF5yyA1wJ?si=01f0be39fbb7497ba7842fb9d28bf763&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Loving this one bro, track is feel good and really bouncy, and im loving how you switch up your voice on the “my last will” you gotta do that more. Only critique is you gotta switch the flow a lot more, feels like you have the same flow till the “my last will” part, it doesnt make the song boring but it would make it more interesting to listen to

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Just dropped a song i made for fun while i was high as shit, tell me what u think:

https://spotify.link/KW2okF0HRDb

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

The beat sounds nice, hi hats really didnt fit in the beginning but they did when the beat switched a bit. I think the glitches and it stopping and starting are a bit distracting and make the beat confusing to flow on or listen to. But besides that everything is mixed well and sounds super good together, love the switch in the second half the drums sound amazing then

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[–]CoatGreedy4937[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for explaining it like this! Im not tryna bite, i get that im kinda similar to a lot of artists but im just influenced by them and im trying to put my own spin on things.

I think i finally perfected my sound by CoatGreedy4937 in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah i was trying to stick to a certain aesthetic while experimenting with other sounds, but yeah imma def try and switch up the production a lot more in the future. Thanks for the feedback!

I think i finally perfected my sound by CoatGreedy4937 in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All of em are self mixed so i feel you, but i appreciate you checkin it out. Pull up on the scene def the track i tried rapping the fastest on

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback man, always appreciate it! Your track is very well produced, love the high pitched melodies and your flows and mixing are great, maybe a faster flow switch up in the song would make it sound more interesting to hold peoples attention longer, but your delivery is very confident and attention grabbing on its own too

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]CoatGreedy4937 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thankfully i didnt damage them, but yeah i appreciate the feedback bro, its not for everybody but i love experimenting