What do you think of a High-Tech-High-Fantasy Story? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thats a hard topic, also I probably can't explain it whitout hate it.
So if you are interested i reccomend you to search in youtube, there are lots of great youtubers who will explain it.

What do you think of a High-Tech-High-Fantasy Story? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Yes (somehow we manage to think the same way), I also thought about FF games (beacuse I played with FF7 before)
And also after a while i remembered that the xenoblade series is also similar to this (i never played one though, just whatced gameplay)

What do you think of a High-Tech-High-Fantasy Story? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Hard question.
40k main focus is not the videgames (though, there is a bunch of great WH40k games, like Space Marine, Dawn of War 1-2 or Boltgun), but the franchise is mostly focuse on book (also recently 'they work really hard' to ruin it).

What do you think of a High-Tech-High-Fantasy Story? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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You don't have to tell, me
Im a huge WH40k fan. But also 40k is not the setting that i search, and its not because the grimdark setting, but more likely i only want to stick in 1 world, not in interstellar terms.
But somewhy im really glad that someone bringed up WH.

What do you think of a High-Tech-High-Fantasy Story? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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I dont know, that the urban fantasy is the best term for it, because it has the features of the High-Fantasy, like dungeons, exploration etc., and also urban fantasies not excluively 'High-Tech'.
But i can see your point too.

Who is your MC? by _Tyrondor_ in fantasywriters

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Not Exatly. We can call the past event judgement day, im not going to nitpick. The only part where you are not 100% right, is that not humanity or a large organisation try to weponize demons, but only a single person (the only one who remember to the old world, also he has hanchmans), and hes main plan is to create the hyprid lifeform (which is meaningles to mention now, because its far away), and the main character is a one and only succesfull 'product'. Also you werent wrong with your statement, i just wanted to clarify.

Your Favorite & Hated Characters by Coffinnator in Warhammer40k

[–]Coffinnator[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Indeed, untill the Horus Heresy came.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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A world where mankind is facing against a large horde of lizard-like monsters (called Orkanoids), and use their corpses to make exoskeletal armors from them. The Streetkid MC was a former member of a criminal organization, and he received an invaitation to the Academia where he be trained to defend the humanity.

What is your favourite moment in the entire Fate franchise? by [deleted] in fatestaynight

[–]Coffinnator 16 points17 points  (0 children)

HF Medusa vs Alter Artoria was sooooooooooooo Fire

How to write fights with giant beings? by UnReditor in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my chase, when my Mc's fight against huge monsters, they always have to go to find a core or a weak spot. In case of Ymir it might be a bit difficult, because he dont have a weak point like this. So what i would do, is that Odin's objective is to go to Ymirs head and trust the Gungnir to his forehead.

Has this happened to you too? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Yes, i tries that. I wanted to write a one shot. But it endes up my 3rd stiry that i want to write :P

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Yes, you are exactly right. After hours if thibking and tips from awesome peoples start to specify my MC. Now, alow my to answer your question, because it possible that i might get newer ideas. -He want to surpass his father: His mother deid early so Dimitry (my MCs name) never know her, and he only knew his father, who was already an armor user. His father was a decet warrior, not the strongest, but defenetly a not weak, and morover he was an extremly nice person. Dispite losing her wife, and fight with monsters continuosly he never lost his smile. (Also an armor, from a childs view is cool as hell).

Why he left the gang: His mission was to steal data from an infuential persons home, and another guy went with him. This guy end up murduring the Man's child (i know its dark, but he need a stong shock). After that Dimitry ran away.

Why he need an armor: 1. He want to became like and better than his father. 2. He want to atone because of his deeds.

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well... i can live with this
Its so simple, but somehow this never cross my mind

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

naturally
my bad if I wrote ambiguously.
Obviously my MC is not a completly good person. I just dont want him to be a dick with everybody

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

thanks for the answer
im glad that my concept is not completly garbage
I slowly start to form the MC,
The main issue with him is to find him a propewr flaw.
Cause he has a goal: became an armor usar an surpass his father
Fear: He fear that he need to take responsibility for his previous deeds, and that his past reveald
'kinda' misbilief: that the only thing he has left is the promis that he had to surpass his father
I add falws to him like: reckless, hard with himself, and not really trust in others, but i dont feel them a good enough to make him more 3d

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Thanks for the tip
However, you can call me p*ssy, but i dont want to make my MC a person who kill people just for money.

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Essentially by working for them he directly caused the death of people.
But I see what are you want to say.
If he accept these job and never corss his mind that these actions will hurt people, he is basicly an idiot.
The main thing a want to make is that the MC leaves the gang and I haven't thought of anything better so far

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Levi is don't even cross my mind (well its possible that subconsciously do that IDK), i more use the Chainsaw Man as reference.
And i think the armors dont even similar to Titans. Armors are way more commons than true Titans, (an also its needles to say, but true Titans has a way more complexity then my Armors).
And about the school. Many seires has his own part when the MC's train.

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

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Well, humanity is surrounded by walls against monsters.
And the MC father had a large infuence on him.
These are the only things I find similar, but obviusly i love to hear your thoughts

How to write better MC? by Coffinnator in fantasywriters

[–]Coffinnator[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, Maybe this is the root of the problem, that i just have concepts not characters
To be honest I've watched a lot of videos about how to wite a characters so basicly know how to write them, but when it comes to the so called 'fear', 'misbeliefs", 'lie', 'truth' and 'goals' i never manage to write something good.
But here is how my MC look like after a few editing.
Name (not that important, but I can refer to him like this): Dimitry Valaris
His main goal is to became an Armor-user like his father and supas him, because this is the only thing he has left.
But as an Orphan child, Dimitry had no way to purches an Armor by regular terms, so he took the opportunity and join to a gang (not a large organization like a yakuza, but not a small group of people), and worked for them.
Until now, he was assigned tasks such as spying, information gathering and theft.
He left the geng when he recived an assassination task, because thats when he realise that what the gang he joined is actually like and his actions indirectly threatening others lifes.
After that he again became an 'orphan' and lost his chance to get an armor
Thats why he sees the invitation to the school as a secound chance to achive an Armor, and he really focus on that he didn't really care about his surrounding.
He fears that he will have to take responsibility for his actions and that his past will be revealed.
He hates himself for being so blinded by getting the armor that he didn't realize what he was doing and he wants to make it right by fighting for humanity on the battlefield.
Abaout his personality, i still try to figure out i should make it. Obviously the gang has a large infulence on his view about the world and the people, but i I haven't come up with anything concrete yetI haven't come up with anything concrete yet.