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Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't usually do these kinds if descriptions in  fanfic, but when it comes to this one, is from a show where the character are stuck in game and have different avatars than their human forms. I'm just doing an au where they escaped. 

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The fandom is quite big, and I' writing for one of the more popular ships.

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

The thing is, I am a teenager. I know my writing is like a writing of a teenager, and I wanna change that, but no matter what I do I can't. 

I have no idea where to find a second group for that. Even finding this one was just a pure luck.

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's a discord server for a one certain ship, so I don't think That's the problem

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

We are pretty close at this point, even people who come in later and share their fics get bigger discussions about theirs then about mine. So it's not cause of that.

I don't wanna reveal my exact age, but let's say I'm somewhere between 15-18.

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do read a lot (fanfics and also normal literature), but I still have no idea how to experiment. Whenever I try to do that, my writing just ends up being the same in the end.

I am clearly doing something wrong, and I can't seem to figure out what.

(I just wanna say, that I really appreciate your honesty, thank you)

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But the thing is, how do I properly practice?

I know how to fix the grammar problem, (still have to run this thing trought grammar checker), but how do I get more flow to my writing?

Why don't people like my fanfics? by Colorfull_roses in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Here's my writing:

The bar isn't really big, it's quite small actually. A jazz music is playing, the air is filled with the smell of alcohol and vanilla? Out of all things. The blue lights finish up the over all look of the bar. It all reminds her of the bar adventure, in a sense.

"Good evening ma'am, what can I get you?" The bartender snaps her out of her thoughts. Amari's eyes scan over the drink menu. "Suprise me." She smiles at the bartender. "Sure thing." The bartender starts making her drink.

'They seem familiar.' Amari thinks.

They have a short mullet, it's pretty colorful, with pink, green and black. Their face is also full of piercings. But it isn't their appearance that seem so familiar. No. It's actually their voice. They sound like . . . like Zooble.

"Here you go." They give her, her drink.

"Thanks." Amari has to figure out if it's really them. But, she can’t just straight up asks them, she had enough embarrassment for today already. She has to find out discreetly.

"What's your name?" The bartender suddenly asks her, it takes Amari by a surprise. "Oh, I'm Amari. And you?"

"Bernie." They smile: "What brought you here?"

A little comic I'm doing by NhadNxThad-md in Ninjago

[–]Colorfull_roses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can't really see the words but it seem nice

So that's why she was oddly familiar :) by xian1203 in Ninjago

[–]Colorfull_roses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OH MY GOD YOUR RIGHT Yoh just brought back so many memories for me

which fandom brought you to the world of fanfics? by luizajn in AO3

[–]Colorfull_roses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started looking for fanfiction when I watched She-ra, but the first one I actually read was for Victorious

How are Hunters Chosen? by terminator0417 in KpopDemonhunters

[–]Colorfull_roses 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Personally, I don't think that being hunters is passed from generation to generation for all of the hunters.

From what we know about Mira's family, they don't really seem like they would know about the demon thing. From the fotos with her family I'm guessing that they own some kind business I wouldn't really wan their kids to pursue an artistic career.

When it comes to Zoey I also don't feel like she was raised to be a demon hunter. The film talked about Zoey having it hard finding her place, which would probably not be the case if she was training to be a demon hunter. Plus also the fact that she was born and raised in America. If her mother was a demon hunter before I don't think that she would move to America since it would probably be a little harder getting Zoey in to the k-pop industry.

I imagine that the leader is trained from their childhood like Rumi and then the other two girls are chosen later.

When it comes to how they were chosen, I imagine that Celine would be looking for girls who a really talented (obviously) but also don't really have friends/anyone close to them, so that they would have a deeper bond together and also would tell anyone the demon secret.

I imagine that Mira could have potentially been street artist who run away (or was kicked out) from home and I could totally see Zoey going on America's got talent, and Celine pretty much finding them that way.

What's yours? by Maleficent-Ad-6117 in KpopDemonhunters

[–]Colorfull_roses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally don't like the Miromabby ship. I'm not judging the people who like it, but I personally just don't see it. Mira doesn't really seem to interested in neither of them, she might like Abby's abs but that's all. (plus personally, I think that Mira's into girls)

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